新航道雅思團隊范文-慈善機構應該幫助所有人還是只幫助自己國家的人？

2016年8月20日雅思大作文題目

Some people think charity organisations should help people in great need wherever they live. However, others think they should help people in their own country. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

解析

仔細審題，我們會發(fā)現(xiàn)題目要求我們討論的觀點是：慈善機構應該幫助所有人，還是僅幫助自己國家的人？這個題目非常有意思，可以從多方面加以討論，但是相對于一般的教育類話題、環(huán)保類話題等，這個話題可能對有些“兩耳不聞窗外事，一心只讀圣賢書”的學生會構成不小的挑戰(zhàn)。當然，有些同學英語詞匯量不夠，連charity是什么意思都不明白，那這個作文對他們而言就是簡直了！

那么，究竟如何構思這篇作文呢？我們可能會本能地覺得，慈善機構應該幫助本國的人，因為慈善機構的錢主要來自本國，但是，在這個全球化的時代，很多慈善機構的錢難道不是來自世界各地嗎？何況，慈善機構的宗旨就是幫助人類克服困難，救助扶持社會中的困難人士，從某種意義上，我們也可以說，在這個全球化時代，幫助其他國家的人本質上也是在幫助自己國家。這樣，好像我們又可以認為慈善機構應該幫助世界上所有需要幫助的人（people in need)。如果我們進一步思考，將慈善機構分為“地區(qū)性的慈善機構”和“全球性的慈善機構”，那么這個問題就更容易討論：地區(qū)性的慈善機構主要應該幫助本國人（有余力的時候幫助外國人），全球性的慈善機構則應放眼全球，哪里需要就到哪里去。

將題目中的關鍵詞進行細分，然后分別討論，是雅思寫作的重要應對策略之一。比如，就“網(wǎng)絡電影能否取代電影院”，我們就可細分，就一般電影而言，網(wǎng)絡完全可以取代電影院，但對于那些特別依賴特殊效果的電影而言，網(wǎng)絡不可能取代電影院；就年輕一代而言，他們可能更愿意在網(wǎng)上看電影，但就年紀比較大的觀眾而言，他們寧愿去電影院，等等。大家可以試著用這種“關鍵詞細分法”去破題，在很多情況下都能柳暗花明，解決你無話可說的窘境。

新航道團隊7分范文

Charity organisations are supposed to offer help to people in great need, such as those suffering from incurable diseases, natural disasters and unexpected accidents. Yet one issue is still in debate: to whom should the money of charity organisations go, exclusively to people who live in the same country as the organisations, or to all people regardless of where they live? To my mind, the answer to this question depends largely on the mission of specific charity organisations.

開頭段，先定義charity organisation引出話題，然后重述題目中的問題，最后提出自己的觀點。請注意：唐老師沒有照抄原題，而是對其進行了重新表述，這是語言表達水平的一個重要方面，學生需要不斷練習才能真正提升這個能力。
such as... 往往能夠給我們提供一個機會來展示我們的知識水平。這里的such as those suffering from...完全可以不要，但正是這個such as后面的內容，讓考官看到了學生的知識面和表達力。
to my mind,... 是一個很有用的短語，意思為“我認為”。多數(shù)學生會使用in my view, in my opinion, as far as I am concerned。
看一看老師在本段使用的幾個副詞(組）。exclusively = only; regardless of = no matter; largely = mainly

One important reason why some people hold the same-country view is that, as they see it, the charity money comes from the rich people and other donators who live in the same country as those needy people, and naturally the charity organisations should help them rather than people from other countries. This is partly true, especially to the local charity groups whose chief concern is to solve the local problems. Yet for such organisations as Bill Gates Charity Foundation whose money comes from the entire world, it is far from enough only to help Americans, although it is headquartered in the U.S. As a matter of fact, Bill Gates Charity Foundation, along with other “global” charity groups, has extended its help to all people in all countries and regions throughout the world.

本段論證不同規(guī)模不同性質的慈善機構使用錢的方向不同。區(qū)分兩類慈善機構：地區(qū)性的和全球性的。
As they see it,... 在他們看來
This is partly true,... 這有一半是正確的
It is far from enough to... 做......遠遠不夠
As a matter of fact = in fact, actually 事實上

Besides, there are charity organisations that address different issues, some of which being daily necessities, others being disease control, environmental protection, to name only a few. Some of these issues are local while others are global in nature. Generally, local charity groups play a more important role in addressing local issues though outside help is also always welcomed, while in face of those global issues like disease control or environmental protection, charity organisations need to travel across territorial borders and offer help to those who live in any part of the world.

本段論證解決不同問題的慈善機構使用錢的方向也不同，將慈善機構分為解決區(qū)域問題的機構和解決全球性問題的機構。
to name only a few相當于“等等”，多數(shù)同學會用and so on...   
while在這里引導轉折，相當于but。

To conclude, where the charity money should go is mainly determined by the chief concerns and missions of different charity organisations. An organisation aiming at solving local issues should spend its money helping people who live in the same country, but if an organisation sets its eyes on global issues, it should not confine itself to a single country. 

本段為結尾段，對前文論述的內容進行重新概括，注意在用語上要與前文保持一定差異。
必須學習本段用不同句型來表達近似內容的方法。an organisation aiming at solving local issues... = if an organisation aims at solving local issues, it ...

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