新航道雅思團隊范文-社交網(wǎng)絡的負面影響

2017年12月16日雅思大作文題目：社交網(wǎng)絡的負面影響

Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

17年最后一場雅思是的大作文是關于社交網(wǎng)絡對個人和社會是否有負面影響的問題。

 

那么社交網(wǎng)絡到底有什么負面影響呢？很多同學可能已經(jīng)感受到，社交網(wǎng)絡在方便我們交流的同時，已經(jīng)對我們造成了一些影響，比如社交網(wǎng)絡使人沉迷，占據(jù)了許多時間；社交網(wǎng)絡還會帶來網(wǎng)絡安全問題，我們的隱私也會隨之泄露等。但是，我們是否要因為社交網(wǎng)絡帶來的負面影響而杜絕它呢？

 

本文認為，我們不應該因噎廢食，反之在接觸社交網(wǎng)絡時，要合理安排時間，保護好自己的隱私，讓它為我們服務，而不是為之所困。

 

新航道團隊范文

 

01

 

Some people believe that social networking sites, such as Facebook, Twitter and Weibo, have exerted a huge negative impact on individuals as well as the society. For me, I partly agree with this opinion. 

 

有些人認為，社交網(wǎng)站，如臉書、推特和微博，對個人和社會都產生了巨大的負面影響。對我來說，我部分同意這個觀點。

 

解析

（1） 本段為引入段，直接進入話題，但在轉述題目觀點時對題目中的social networking sites進行了具體舉例描寫，這是題目改寫的一種策略。

（2）  exert 產生

（3）  partly 部分地

 

02

 

There is no denying that social network has brought us such a great convenience that we are able to contact others anytime and anywhere. Sharing personal feelings with their friends or strangers through words, photos or videos provides social websites users with great satisfaction so that they feel they are accepted by a community to which they belong.

 

不可否認，社交網(wǎng)絡給我們帶來了極大的便利，我們可以隨時隨地與他人聯(lián)系。通過文字、照片或視頻與朋友們或陌生人分享個人的感受，給社交網(wǎng)站的用戶帶來了極大的滿足感，讓他們覺得在所屬社區(qū)中有歸屬感。

 

解析

（1）本段先講社交網(wǎng)站給我們帶來的好處。

（2）satisfaction 滿足

（3）community 社區(qū)

 

03

 

However, those benefits are accompanied by a lot of potential negative influence. For one thing, individuals tend to be addicted to the Internet. Therefore, time and energy supposed to be spent in studying and working is wasted in renewing and browsing websites. For another, the issue of web security has already been a great concern for the whole society. For example, some people, especially teenagers and elder people, fail to realize that not only our friends but also strangers have access to the personal information in the social websites. They post their real names, photos or family addresses on their public homepages and allow them to be viewed by others. Consequently, the rate of Internet fraud gradually rises since criminals will make use of the leaked personal information for illegal purposes.

 

然而，這些好處伴隨著許多潛在的負面影響。一方面，個人往往沉迷于互聯(lián)網(wǎng)。因此，本應花在學習和工作上的時間和精力就浪費在更新和瀏覽網(wǎng)站上了。另一方面，網(wǎng)絡安全問題已經(jīng)成為全社會關注的焦點。例如，有些人，特別是青少年和老年人，沒有意識到，能夠看到我們在社交網(wǎng)站上個人信息的不僅有我們的朋友，還有陌生人，他們在公共主頁上發(fā)布真實姓名、照片或家庭住址，而且讓他人瀏覽。因此，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)犯罪率逐漸上升，因為犯罪分子將利用泄露的個人信息做非法用途。

 

解析

（1）本段論證社交網(wǎng)站給個人和社會帶來的潛在風險。

（2）accompany 伴隨

（3）potential 潛在的

（4）be addicted to 沉迷于......

（5）have access to 可以使用，可以進入

（6）criminal 罪犯（的）

 

04

 

From the above discussion, it is clear that social networking sites can bring conveniences as well as dangers to our life. As social websites constitute such a significant part of our life that we now cannot do without them, we have to learn to use them properly so as to maximize their benefits and minimize their potential risks. 

 

從上面的討論中，可以清楚地看到社交網(wǎng)站可以給我們的生活帶來便利和危險。由于社交網(wǎng)站是我們生活中非常重要的組成部分，現(xiàn)在我們沒有社交網(wǎng)站寸步難行，因此我們必須學會正確地使用它們，使其益處化，并限度地減少其潛在風險。

 

解析

（1）本段為結論段。

（2）constitute 是，構成

（3）cannot do without... 沒有......不行

（4）maximize 使......化

（5）minimize 使......最小化

 

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