新航道雅思團隊范文-這個和年輕人相關的問題你有思路嗎？

2017年11月25日雅思大作文題目：這個和年輕人相關的問題你有思路嗎？

As major cities around the world are growing fast, many problems occur. What problems that young people live in cities are caused by continued growth? What solutions do you suggest?

本周雅思作文問的是城市擴張給城市里的年輕人帶來了哪些問題，如何解決這些問題？

 

唐老師在雅思真題作文題庫中搜索后發(fā)現(xiàn)，本題是2014年9月16日和2010年8月14日的原題翻版，再次印證了唐老師的一個基本判斷：近期雅思考試作文最容易復現(xiàn)2014年下半年和2015年上半年的原題。請各位烤鴨復習時注意抓重點。

 

城市擴張，意味著越來越多的年輕人涌入城市，這會帶來什么樣的問題？其實，稍微想一下，我們就能發(fā)現(xiàn)各種可能的問題，比如就業(yè)壓力，住房壓力，交通擁堵，城市安全，子女教育等等。至于解決辦法，無非是政府擴大就業(yè)機會，重視年輕人再教育問題，甚至限制年輕人進入大城市等等。

 

總體來說，本周題目的難度并不大，這類問題也是我們平時都經(jīng)常討論和思考的，因此，本周作文比拼的可能還是在語言表達方面。

 

新航道團隊范文

 

01

 

Now it seems that all the big cities around the world are still endlessly expanding. The population of Shanghai, for example, was just 10 million in 1990s, yet today the figure has soared up to 30 million. The cosmopolitan expansion means that more people, young people in particular, are rushing into the big cities and this may cause a host of problems.

 

現(xiàn)在，世界上所有的大城市似乎還在不斷擴大。例如，上海的人口在1990年代只有1000萬，但今天這個數(shù)字已經(jīng)飆升到了3000萬。大城市的擴張意味著更多的人，特別是年輕人，正涌向大城市，而這可能會引起許多問題。

 

解析

 

（1）本段為引入段：用例子簡要說明大城市仍然在擴張，這可能帶來問題。

（2） expand 擴張

（3） soar up 飆升

（4） cosmopolitan 世界性的(adj.)；大城市（n.）

（5）  a host of 許多 （=many)

 

02

 

The first problem that faces the young people in big cities is that a good job will become increasingly difficult to come by since the competition in the job market will surely intensify as young people, most of whom are well educated, decide to pursue their dreams in the big cities. It is now not uncommon that a university position may attract more than 100 applicants. Secondly, as these young people settle down in the big cities, they will soon have their own family, which will impose great pressure on the city’s housing. In fact, this is exactly one of the major reasons why housing in the big cities today is so expensive. Then, when their children reach the school age, they will find it hard to get them into school, because the educational resources are very limited. Finally, a large number of young people living under great pressure in the big cities may bring about such social problems as unemployment and crimes. 

 

大城市的年輕人面臨的個問題是，一份好工作將變得越來越難以獲得，因為隨著年輕人（多數(shù)都受過良好的教育）決定在大城市里追求自己的夢想，就業(yè)市場上的競爭必將加劇?，F(xiàn)在，一個大學的職位可能吸引超過100名申請者，這已屢見不鮮。其次，隨著這些年輕人在大城市穩(wěn)定下來，他們很快會有自己的家庭，這將給城市住房帶來產(chǎn)生很大的壓力。事實上，這正是大城市里住房如此昂貴主要原因之一。而且，當他們的孩子到了上學的年齡，他們會發(fā)現(xiàn)很難讓他們進入學校，因為教育資源非常有限。最后，大批年輕人生活在大城市里的巨大壓力下，可能會帶來的失業(yè)和犯罪等社會問題。

 

解析

 

(1) 本段論述年輕人生活在大城市帶來的問題，主要討論了三個問題：就業(yè)問題、住房和子女教育問題、社會問題（沒有展開論述）。

(2) face 面對

(3) come by 獲得；得到

(4) intensify 加劇

(5) pursue 追求

(6) not uncommon 不罕見

(7) impose...on... 強加......在......身上

(8) educational resources 教育資源

 

03

 

To solve these problems, I would suggest that the government take measures to limit the number of people migrating into the big cities. In fact, cities like New York and Beijing have already set standards for those who want to come in. Meanwhile, it is highly advisable that the government offer practical programs so that the young people living in the big cities can receive further education to make them more competitive in the job market. The most essential thing that the government should do, of course, is develop a strong economy, which is the most effective cure for the diseases in the big cities.

 

為了解決這些問題，我建議政府采取措施限制遷入大城市的人數(shù)。事實上，像紐約和北京這樣的城市已經(jīng)建立了準入標準。同時，政府應提供切實可行的計劃，使住在大城市的年輕人能夠接受更多的教育，讓他們在就業(yè)市場更有競爭力。當然，政府應該做的最重要的事情是建立一個強大的經(jīng)濟，這是治療大城市疾病的最有效辦法。

 

解析

 

(1) 本段針對前面的問題提出解決方法。

(2) migrate 遷徙

(3) set standards 制定標準

(4) advisable 明智的，適當?shù)?/p>

(5) essential 重要的

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