2017年3月4日雅思大作文題目:年輕人不喜歡學習的原因及解決辦法
Many young people leave school with negative attitudes towards learning. Why? How to encourage positive attitudes?
首先申明一下:本題中的learning有一定歧義,它既可指學習,也可以指學問/知識。
那么,本題到底是說年輕人對學習的態(tài)度是消極的,還是對學問/知識的態(tài)度是消極的?
仔細想來,兩者的差異還蠻大的:如果是對學習的態(tài)度不好,那原因可能就是外在因素(包括網絡游戲的影響)和內在因素(學習太辛苦,而且好像不學習一樣可以生活得很好);如果是對學問/知識的態(tài)度不好,那原因可能就是外在因素(學的知識太陳舊,很枯燥)和內在因素(在崇尚物質的社會里,對知識沒有敬畏之心)。本文按照一般理解,選擇討論個意義:即討論學生為什么不喜歡學習的原因及解決辦法。
其實,本題在2014年曾經兩度出現(xiàn)。
2014年1月18日問的是現(xiàn)在學生為什么不能潛心學習的原因,而同年5月24日的雅思作文題目則與本題完全一樣。
從本質上看,這兩題的問題是一致的:學生不喜歡學習=學生對學習采取消極態(tài)度。如前所述,在討論原因的時候,我們可以首先討論淺層次的原因,比如現(xiàn)在各種干擾(distraction)太多,然后討論深層次的原因,比如現(xiàn)在大家覺得學習好與生活好之間的關系不是那么緊密了。至于解決辦法,則可分別針對這兩個原因提出:比如,控制學生游戲時間,鼓勵他們閱讀;或者讓學生明白,生活好的定義不僅僅是好工作和高收入,還包括對世界的認識和理解,不學習是不可能達到后者境界的。
新航道團隊7分范文
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Many young people, once leaving school, have expressed their resentment toward learning, saying they will never get back to school. Then, what makes these young people hate their school life so vehemently?
很多年輕人一旦離開學校,就表達他們對學習的怨恨,還說再也不會回到學校。那么,是什么使得這些年輕人如此強烈地討厭學校生活呢?
解析
(1) 開頭段引入話題。唐老師先簡單地描寫(不是照搬題目原句?。┠贻p人對學習的態(tài)度,然后提出問題。
(2) resentment n. 怨恨(=dislike; hatred)
(3) vehemently adv. 強烈地;猛烈地(=strongly)
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There could be two reasons why this happens. First, today the students are surrounded by so many distractions that they gradually find that learning is too boring and uninteresting. While students two decades ago had nearly no choice but sit in the classroom and read books, students today have easy and fast access to Internet, on which they can do almost all things. For instance, they can play computer games, watch videos, search for any information they need, and chat with their friends, to mention just a few. So, having been used to this kind of “easy” online life, many young people simply cannot put their heart into the more serious and consuming school work.
這種現(xiàn)象發(fā)生可能有兩個理由。首先,今天的學生被各種各樣的誘惑包圍著,他們慢慢發(fā)現(xiàn)學習太過單調無趣。20年前的學生幾無別的選擇,只能坐在教室讀書,而今天的學生可以又快又方便地進入因特網,在這里他們什么事情都可以完成。比如,可以玩電腦游戲、看電影、查詢需要的信息、和朋友聊天,諸如此類。因此,習慣這種“容易的”網上生活后,很多年輕人根本無法再把心思放回到更嚴肅、更費精力的學業(yè)上。
解析
(1)本段分析學生不喜歡學習的個理由,也是淺層次的外部理由:學生因為外部干擾(尤其是互聯(lián)網的干擾)而討厭學習。
(2)distraction: 干擾
(3)access:進入;使用
(4)to name just a few:如此等等;諸如此類
(5)consuming 耗費的(比如time-consuming耗時的;energy-consuming耗能量的)
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Another important factor that affects the students' attitude towards learning is that a good education seems not as important as before. For quite a long time, receiving a good education was the only way for young people to get a decent job and earn a high salary. But now, this is apparently not the case any more. Influenced by business stars like Bill Gates and Steve Jobs, many young people now begin to believe that one’s success is not in proportion to the education s/he receives. The students, therefore, are not motivated enough to focus on their learning.
另外一個影響學生學習態(tài)度的因素是,良好的教育似乎不像以往那么重要了。在很長一段時間內,接受好的教育是年輕人獲好工作、掙高工資的路徑,但是現(xiàn)在看起來似乎不是那樣了。受比爾.蓋茨、史蒂夫.喬布斯這些商界明星的影響,很多年輕人現(xiàn)在開始相信,一個人的成功與他/她所受的教育并不成正比,因此,這些學生就沒有動力來專心學習了。
解析
(1)本段討論學生不喜歡學習的另一個原因,也是更深層次的內在原因:學生不再相信只有受教育才能成功了。
(2)factor n. 因素
(3)decent adj. 體面的
(4)apparently adv. 表面看地;明顯地
(5)in proportion to... 與......成正比
(6)motivated adj. 有動力的
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As education of the young is so important to the future of the world, we ought to find ways out of this embarrassing situation. For example, the school and parents should work together to set limits on the time children spend online and encourage them to devote more time to learning. Besides, young people should be made to understand that life is not just about making money, but about having rich and colorful experience and learning is the best gateway to that rewarding life.
年輕人的教育對世界的未來至關重要,因此我們應該找到辦法走出這個尷尬的困境。比如,學校和父母應該合作起來,給孩子上網的時間設限,鼓勵他們投入更多時間來學習。此外,還應該讓年輕人明白,生活的意義不僅僅是掙錢,還在于擁有更豐富更精彩的體驗,而學習正是抵達那種有價值的生活的通路。
解析
(1) 本段提出解決辦法,分別針對前面兩個原因,這樣可以確保文章的連貫性。唐老師不喜歡原因分析和解決辦法互不相關的寫作。
(2) embarrassing adj. 令人尷尬的
(3) set limits on... 給......設限
(4) devote...to... 投入......到......
(5) gateway n. 通路
(6) rewarding adj. 有回報的;有價值的
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