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8月2日雅思大作文范文

Some people say modern children's games do not develop a wide range of skills, while traditional games can be much better for developing such skills.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

新航道團(tuán)隊(duì)范文

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Some argue that children who play modern games may not develop a wide range of skills as those who play traditional games do. I find this idea unconvincing. Without denying the merits of traditional games, I am more in favour of modern games, whose better scientific rationale and diversity make them more desirable.

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First, modern games are designed based on proven scientific theories and principles, whereas traditional games may not be. [whereas引出比較，并且，由于前半句褒獎(jiǎng)的modern games，所有whereas 后的否定詞not就是暗示一種批評(píng)traditional games] [接下來(lái)解釋什么叫做are designed based on proven scientific theories and principles，并且在解釋的過(guò)程中不斷“正評(píng)價(jià)”] When producing games, developers of modern games refer to scientific findings regarding children’s cognitive development, and as a result, the design of those games often aligns with the patterns of children’s development of skills. By marked contrast, traditional games, descending through generations, are based on experience, empirical practice that may be counterproductive. In other words, [引出上一句中counterproductive的詳情] traditional games not only fail to promote children’s skills but also limit them. [接下來(lái)不斷“負(fù)評(píng)價(jià)”traditional games] This crucial difference enables modern games to better foster children’s skills. [最后故意點(diǎn)一下題，但是這個(gè)不是必要的，是在這一篇文章里依情況而定的一種臨場(chǎng)設(shè)計(jì)]

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In addition, modern games are characterized by [“以…為特點(diǎn)”] their variety of types, whereas traditional games are monotonous [“單調(diào)的”]. When children play a wide range of games, a broad array of skills may develop accordingly. For example, LEGO bricks promote children’s imagination; playing educational video games lays a foundation of children’s literacy, numeracy as well as reasoning. In comparison, during the play of traditional games, which are confined [confine: “局限”] to a few types games, players learn merely a limited number of skills. This is another key difference that highlights modern games and overshadows traditional games. 

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In conclusion, their forms diverse and their design complying with science, modern games are more recommendable than traditional games. Through modern games, it is more likely that versatile children are cultivated. 

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