支招小作文(174) I 動態(tài)柱圖 四個國家可回收能源占比

[2024/ 2/ 3] The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.

【主體段分段】：

<方法1>：按時間分段（本篇文章采用此種分段方法）

<方法2>：按數(shù)值大小分段

- Body 1：Iceland + Turkey（數(shù)值較大）

- Body 2：Australia + Sweden（數(shù)值較小）

【開頭段】

The bar chart compares the use of sustainable energy in Australia, Sweden, Iceland and Turkey over the period from 1997 to 2010.

【概述段】

In general, compared with other three countries, Iceland relied more on renewable energy. Also, this is the country where the figure for such energy resources witnessed the most dramatic growth.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- Iceland數(shù)值始終

- Iceland數(shù)值變化幅度

【Body 1】

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that in the initial year, 45% of the energy in Iceland was from renewable sources, and this figure was followed by that in Turkey(38%). Australia and Sweden shared a similar figure, with only roughly 8%. 

思路要點(diǎn)：1997年

- Iceland→45%，Turkey→排第二（38%）

- Australia和Sweden→數(shù)據(jù)相似，約為8%

【Body 2】

In the subsequent years, two countries experienced a growth in their consumption of renewable energy. A drastic rise could be found in Iceland, with the figure reaching 70% in 2010. The energy consumption in Sweden also witnessed an increase, climbing slightly by 2% in the final year.  

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 后續(xù)年份，Iceland 和 Sweden數(shù)值上升

- Iceland：急劇上升到2010的70%

- Sweden：小幅度上升了2%

【Body 3】

However, a different trend could be found in the use of sustainable energy in other two countries. To be more specific, the period of 13 years(1997-2010) saw a marginal decline in the consumption of such energy resources in Australia, with the figure of only 5%. The figure in Turkey modestly rose to its peak at 41% in 2000, before falling significantly to 32% in the last year.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 另外兩個國家數(shù)據(jù) 呈現(xiàn)不同趨勢

- Australia：小幅度下降

- Turkey：小幅度上升→顯著下降