支招小作文(167) I 靜態(tài)柱圖 英國(guó)藝術(shù)&物理專(zhuān)業(yè)畢業(yè)生去向

[2023/ 12/ 2] The chart below shows the destinations of students graduating from Physics and Art in the UK in 2007.

【主體段分段】：按照?qǐng)D分段

Body 1：employment + working and studying

Body 2：其余三個(gè)類(lèi)別

【開(kāi)頭段】

The bar chart compares the choices of graduates from Arts and Physics in Britain for the year 2007.

【概述段】

Overall, students majoring in physics outnumbered those from art among all the given destinations. The largest gap between these two groups of graduates could be found in employment.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 所有選擇中都是physics>art

- Employment中art和physics的差距

【Body 1】

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that employment was the most favorable option for graduates — 35% of the physics majors and 25% of the students who majored in art decided to seek employment. By contrast, for both majors, only less than 10% of the students chose to work and study, making this choice the least attractive one.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 選擇employment的人數(shù)最多（physics有35%，Art有25%）

- 兩個(gè)專(zhuān)業(yè)畢業(yè)生中選擇work and study的人數(shù)最少，<10%

【Body 2】

We can also see that continuous study and training was chosen by 20% of students who studied physics and 15% of those from art. A similar difference could be found in unemployment, where the proportion of physics graduates(15%) slightly outnumbered students with a degree in art. However, roughly the same percentages of students from both majors made other decisions, with the figure of roughly 8%.  

思路要點(diǎn)：

- further training and study：physics--20%，art--15%

- unemployment有類(lèi)似的差距

- others：art和physics數(shù)據(jù)相似--大約8%