支招小作文(165) I 靜態(tài)線 澳洲四個年齡段的通訊方式對比

[2023/ 11/ 18] The graph below shows the percentage of people using Internet, cellphones, telephones and posts to communicate with their friends and families in Australia in 2011. 

靜態(tài)的線圖相信各位考生拿到題之后會有點沒有頭緒，其實我們可以轉(zhuǎn)化成平時更熟悉的靜態(tài)表或靜態(tài)柱圖來分析：

【主體段分段】：

<方法1>：按照年齡分段（藍(lán)+橘一段，黃+綠一段）

<方法2>：按照通訊方式分段（Internet+mobile phone一段，telephone+post一段）——本篇文章采用此種分段方法

【開頭段】

The line chart compares four age groups in Australia in terms of their ways of communication with friends and family members for the year 2011.

【概述段】

Overall, advanced means of communication were more attractive to younger groups of people, while people older than 36 preferred traditional ways.

思路要點：

- <18和18-36的人→用Internet和mobile phone更多

- 36-60和60+的人→用telephone和post更多

【Body 1】

It is clear that for both internet and mobile phones, the youngest and people aged from 18 to 35 were the dominant users. This is particularly true for the internet—half of the surveyed under-18s and 40% of the 18-to-35-year-olds chose to use it for communication. However, these two types of technology did not obtain much popularity among the older groups. Internet was the least popular for the middle-aged and elders, with the figures of roughly 15% and 8%.  When it comes to the use of mobile phones, a similar pattern could be found among these two age groups.

思路要點：internet 和mobile phone：

- <18和18-35是主要使用群體

- internet：以上2個年齡段分別占比50%和40%

- 這兩種通訊方式在年齡較大的群體中 使用率較低

- internet：36-60和60+的比例都是四種通訊方式中

- mobile phone中這兩個年齡段數(shù)據(jù)→呈現(xiàn)相似規(guī)律

【Body 2】

We can also see that telephones and posts were mainly used by the middle-aged people(36-60) and the oldest, with the figures of 35% and 42% respectively. Although the figure for telephone users who were between 18 and 35 ranked the second place(30%), the elders became the second largest group of clients for posts. By contrast, posts were only favored by 5% of people under 18, and this figure was one-third of the figure for telephone.

思路要點：telephone和post

-36-60和60+使用率較高的2種方式

- 36-60在這兩種方式中占比都

- telephone：18-35排第二，但是post中60+排第二

- post：<18只占5%，是同年齡段使用telephone的1/3