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[2023/ 10/21] The maps below show the Riverside Park in 2010 and the Riverside Park now.

【主體段分段】：一圖一段

【開頭段】

The maps compare the layout of Riverside Park in 2010 and now.

【概述段】

In general, the park has witnessed remarkable changes, and more leisure facilities have been constructed.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 整個(gè)區(qū)域變化大

- 休閑功能區(qū)增多

【Body 1】

In the initial year, we can see that in the northern side of the park, a river flew from the west to the east. To the south of it, another river ran from the northeast to the southwest, with a toilet lying to the western side. In the southwestern corner of the park, there were some trees and some car parks. On the eastern side, a heritage railway traveled through the park from the north to the south.

思路要點(diǎn)：2010 年（一般過去時(shí)）

- 公園北面，有一條西→東的河

- 在它南邊有另一條東北→西南走向的河，這條河西邊有一個(gè)toilet

- 公園的西南角，一些樹和一些停車場

- 公園最東邊，有一條南北走向的heritage railway

【Body 2】

At present, we can find that in the northern part, a cycle path has been built to the southern bank of the river. Looking at the southern part, there were no changes to the previous toilet, trees and car parks. Besides, a cafe, some swings, sports fields and a station have appeared to the western side of the river, with a newly constructed parking and hotel located to the opposite side.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 北面河流的南岸，新建了一條cycle path

- 南邊原來的toilet、trees和car parks沒變化

- 南邊河流的西邊，新增了swings, sports fields 和一個(gè)station；河對岸新建了一個(gè)parking和hotel