支招小作文(160) | 線圖 四個年齡段參觀博物館比例

[2023/ 9/ 23] The graph below shows the percentage of people visiting museum once a month or more between 1980 and 2010.

【主體段分段】：按照趨勢分段

【開頭段】

The line graph compares four age groups that went to the museum at least once a month from 1980 to 2010.

【概述段】

Overall, only the percentage of people aged between 46 and 65 showed a downward trend. Besides, the most dramatic change could be found in the figure for the youngest group.

思路要點：

- 只有灰色整體下降趨勢

- 藍色變化幅度

【Body 1】

Originally, more people aged 26-45 visited the museum than other age groups, with the figure of 30%. Subsequently, this figure saw a noticeable climb to 40% in 1988, before falling slightly by 5% in the next 8 years. The last 14 years witnessed a sharp growth to 55%. Similarly, the proportion of young people(18-25) soared from only 15% in 1980 to almost 70% in 2010, overtaking the figure for the 26-to-45-year-olds in 1996.

思路要點：橘色+藍色

- 橘色：年數(shù)據(jù)(30%)→顯著上升到1988年達到40%→隨后8年輕微下降了5%→最后14年急劇上升到55%

- 藍色：從1980年的15%急劇上升到2010年的幾乎70%，在1996年超過橘色

【Body 2】

We can also see that in the first 8 years, a marginal rise from 25% to 30% could be found in the proportion of 46-to-65-year-old people, after which there was a remarkable drop by 15% in the final year. Likewise, the figure for the oldest age group tripled to 30% in the beginning 16-year period, followed by a descent to 10% in 2004. Afterwards, this figure exceeded the percentage of people aged 46-65 and doubled in 2010.

思路要點：灰色+黃色

- 灰色：1980-1988之間從25%小幅度上升到30%→最終一年明顯下降了15%

- 黃色：最開始16年上漲了3倍達到30%→2004年下降到10%→超過黃色，最終在2010年翻倍