支招小作文（151） | 線圖 醫(yī)療系統(tǒng)滿意度

[2023/ 7/ 15] The chart shows the percentage of people who were satisfied with the health care system from 1971 to 2007. 

【主體段分段】：

【方法1】：按照[時間]分段

【方法2】：按照[國家--趨勢]分段（本篇文章采取此種分段思路）

【開頭段】

The line graph compares the rate of people’s positive feedback to healthcare systems in UK, USA, Canada and France between 1971 and 2007.

【概述段】

Overall, the overall degree of satisfaction towards the medical system in Canada and UK showed an upward trend, while the figures in the other two countries witnessed a downward trend.  

思路要點：

Canada和UK整體上升，其余2個國家趨勢整體↓

【Body 1】

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the satisfaction rate in USA ranked the top in the initial year(roughly 84%), followed by a noticeable drop by 20% in the following 36 years. By contrast, the figure in Canada saw a constant rise from 78% in 1971 year to nearly 94% in the final year, overtaking the figure in USA in 1983.

思路要點：

- USA：最開始→隨后顯著下降

- Canada：平穩(wěn)上升，1983年超過USA

【Body 2】

We can also see that although only around half of the surveyed people in UK and France were satisfied with the medical service in the original year, this figure ascended to 60% in 1983. Subsequently, the rate of satisfaction in UK exceeded that in France and climbed remarkably to the peak at 81% in 1995, before falling marginally by 5% in 2007. The satisfaction rate in France, however, witnessed a slight decline to around 46% in 1995, after which the last 12 years experienced a slow growth by 2%. 

思路要點：

1-1971年UK和France大約50%，隨后在1983年上升到60%

2-隨后，UK超過France→顯著上升→輕微下降

France：小幅度下降→輕微上升