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[2023/ 4/ 22] The table and pie charts below show the proportion of local and non-local students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2009.

開頭段：

The table and pie charts illustrate changes in the figures for domestic and international students studying in Australian universities for the year 2001 and 2009.

概述段：

Overall, the 9-year period witnessed a significant rise in the total number of Australian university students. Also, there were more local students than foreign students in both years.

【思路要點】：

- university students的總?cè)藬?shù)上升。

- Local人數(shù)在2年內(nèi)都超過non-local人數(shù)。

主體段

思路1：按照圖分段 （本篇文章 采用此種分段思路）

Body 1：表格信息描述

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the total number of university students in Australia witnessed a noticeable rise from 33000 in 2001 to 39000 in 2009. More specifically, in the initial year, there were 28300 local students, which was almost 7 times the figure for their non-local counterparts. Afterwards, there emerged a significant decline in the figure for domestic students to 27300 in 2009, while the number of international students more than doubled to 11700.

【思路要點】：

- Australian university 總?cè)藬?shù)從33000顯著上升到39000.

-  local總數(shù)從2001年的28300下降到 2009年的27300，占比下降了16%。

- 對比而言，non-local總?cè)藬?shù)翻了2倍多，到2009年達到11700。

Body2：餅圖--local students

From the first pie chart, it is manifest that in the original year, 86% of all the college students were local ones, 46% of whom were females. Subsequently, the figure for female local students only dropped slightly by 6% in the following 8 years, where as a noticeable drop could be found in the percentage of males from 40% to 30%. 

【思路要點】：

- 2001年local占比86%，46%是female。

- female輕微下降了6%，但males從40%顯著下降到30%。

Body 3：餅圖--non-local students

As for international students, there were 14% of all the students who came from abroad in the year 2001, consisting of 9% males and 5% females. After 8 years, there were almost no changes to the former figure. However, the proportion of non-local females was on a sharp climb, reaching 20% in 2009. As a result, females outnumbered their male counterparts in the end of the given period.

【思路要點】：

- 2001年non-local占比14%，包含9%的males和5%的females

- 2009年，male占比幾乎不變。但是，female占比急劇上漲到20%

- female在這一年占比反超male

主體段 思路2：按照時間分段（整合表格、餅圖信息 綜合對比。）

Body 1：2001年

- 學(xué)生總?cè)藬?shù)33000

- 86%是local，男女占比相似

- 4700人是non-local，male占比(9%)大約是female的2倍

Body 2：2009年

- 總?cè)藬?shù)顯著上升到39000

- non- local人數(shù)急劇上升了16%，到達11700

-其中，non-local females在這一年比例 超過non-local males的比例

- local人數(shù)顯著下降到27300

- 其中，females的比例輕微下降了6%，但是males的比例顯著下降到30%.