支招小作文（138） | 地圖 圖書館變遷

【地圖】

The maps below show the changes of the school library.

主體段分段方法：按照區(qū)域位置分段

Body 1：南北 變化前后的對比

Body 2：西邊、東邊 變化前后的對比

時(shí)態(tài)：張圖的信息用【一邊過去時(shí)態(tài)】，第二張圖的信息用【現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)】描述變化

The maps demonstrate the original layout of a library five years ago and how it looks like at present.

Overall, the maps indicate that the library has witnessed noticeable changes during the given period. Especially, there has been more space for self-study.

【概述段】：變化描述用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)

It is clear that five years ago, two groups of bookshelves were located on the northern and southern side, with 5 desks in the central part of the library. Currently, although the former bookshelves in the north have remained unchanged, those on the southern part have been replaced by a separate laptop room. Meanwhile, the initial study area has been expanded.

【解析】：

Body 1：描述南北變化前后的對比。

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Looking at the western part, we can see that five years ago, there was a meeting room between a classroom and an area for borrowing-and-returning books. At present, although the meeting room still exists, the room on the south of it has been transferred into a single area for borrowing books, and a newly-built audio area has replaced the original classroom. Also, we can see the addition of a room for returning books on the southwestern corner. Meanwhile, from the first map we can find that along the eastern side of the library was a computer room, with the Library Office lying on the southeastern corner. However, these two sections have been demolished to make way for a study room for students with laptop and a conference room.

【解析】：

Body 2：描述西邊、東邊 變化前后的對比。

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