支招小作文（136） | 柱圖 澳洲就業(yè)人數(shù)

【2023.4.1小作文真題】

The chart below shows the number of people employed in five types of work in one region of Australia in 2001 and 2008.

柱圖：反映數(shù)據(jù)之間的對比關系

【細化對比】

1. 同項目不同時間：2001年對比2008年（以sales為例）。

2. 同時間不同項目：以白色柱子（2001年為例） sales 對比computing和nursing

【開頭段】

The bar chart shows how many employees were recruited in five categories of work in one region of Australia. Two historical years, 2001 and 2008, are investigated. 

☆ 首段需說明【圖表大致內容】。題目中給出的時間狀語，可以在轉述時拆分開，寫成單獨的一個句子。

☆ 劃線部分使用同位語成分

☆ 詞匯小結

recruit v. 招聘

historical adj. 歷史的

investigate v. 調查

【主體部分段】

The realm of sales draws immediate attention, as the largest number of people chose to work as a sales representative in both 2001 and 2008, with 155,000 and 165,000 respectively. Likewise, starting at approximately 60,000, both the numbers of staff in the fields of computing and nursing experienced growths. Specifically, one rose moderately by 10,000, while the other grew significantly to nearly 80,000. 

☆ 第1句，原因狀語從句。

先總結銷售人數(shù)特征，即前后兩個年份，均為人數(shù)最多。

☆ 第2句，開頭的地方是動詞分詞詞組的“懸垂”現(xiàn)象，作為句子的狀語。

然后，接著對比同為“增長”的另兩類工作；最后，在第3句話中細化對比各自的變化程度。

☆ 詞匯小結

realm n. 領域

draw immediate attention 引人注目

likewise adv. 同樣地

【主體部分第二段】

As for the remaining types of work, there were 65,000 accountants in 2001, almost three times as many as farmers. Afterwards, the year of 2008 saw a fall in both two categories, with the figures decreasing by 10,000 and 5,000 respectively. It is also worth mentioning that farmers were always the least sought-after profession.

☆ 第1句：起始年份-2001年，會計和農(nóng)民的人數(shù)對比。

☆ 第2句：終點年份-2008年，兩類工作的就業(yè)人數(shù)均減少。

☆ 第3句：補充重要數(shù)據(jù)特征：農(nóng)民數(shù)量始終最少。

☆ 詞匯小結

accountant n. 會計

sought-after adj. 廣受歡迎的

profession n. 職業(yè)

【結尾段: 對數(shù)據(jù)特征的宏觀綜述】

Overall, the difference between the two years varied from sector to sector, and the high employment rate in sales stands out.

☆ 詞匯小結

sector n. 行業(yè)

stand out 引人注目