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[2022.12.3 考場(chǎng)小作文]

The table below gives the percentage of GDP occupied by health spending in five different countries in 2022.

【2017.7.9舊題翻新】

Task 1:圖表類型—table, 考查重點(diǎn)—數(shù)值對(duì)比，細(xì)化至三個(gè)方面spending的比較。

Introduction

The table depicts how the health spending of both public and private sectors contributed to GDP in five different countries in 2022.

[詞匯使用——對(duì)于核心內(nèi)容的轉(zhuǎn)述]

Body 1

When it comes to the total spending, two countries, the USA and Germany, draw immediate attention, as particularly large proportions were found, with 40% and 35% respectively. Meanwhile, a limited amount of total expenditure was observed in the three remainders, being within a narrow range of 20% to 30%. 

語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)小結(jié)：

同位語(yǔ)成分

原因狀語(yǔ)從句

伴隨狀語(yǔ)

詞匯：

程度修飾詞/短語(yǔ)的使用 

Body 2

Regarding the public and private spending, the public spending had an advantage over the private one, with the gap being between 2% and 5%, except in the USA, where the percentage of the former was 3% lower than that of the latter. It is also worth mentioning that the USA and Germany also took the lead in terms of the expenses by both the public and individuals.

語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)小結(jié)：

獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

定語(yǔ)從句

主語(yǔ)從句

詞匯：

表現(xiàn)‘比較關(guān)系’的短語(yǔ) 

Conclusion

Overall, the USA is noteworthy for its high total spending as well as private spending, while Germany stands out for its high expenditure by the public. Meanwhile, there were no enormous differences found in other four countries.