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The bar chart below shows the percentages of males between 16 and 25 years old who watched and participated six kinds of sports in 2014.
【para 1- 概述柱圖信息——對比:“同時(2014)不同項(watching & participating)”】
Shown in the bar chart are the proportion of male viewers aged between 16 and 25 who watched six types of sports and their corresponding participation in these sports in 2014.
語言點小結:
1. 倒裝句: 注意其中包含的be動詞的使用
2. 詞匯使用:同義替換+詞性替換
【para 2- 數(shù)值分組——組1: tennis & swimming—細致描述各自特征:1. tennis:一組藍色柱子(watching項)比例超過橙色柱子(participating項), 且前者為所有項目中數(shù)值項;2. swimming:橙色柱子(participating項)單項中數(shù)值,且兩柱之間的差異(20%)與tennis的兩項差異相同 】
Tennis and swimming both draw immediate attention, as one had the largest viewing figure, attracting 50% of audiences, while the other witnessed the highest participation rate(40%). It is also worth mentioning that tennis was the only sports whose viewing figure had an apparent advantage over the participation rate. Meanwhile, a similar gap of 20% was also observed between the two figures for swimming.
語言點小結:
1. 句子主語的變化
2. 指代詞的使用
3. 詞匯替換
4. 伴隨狀語
5. 定語從句
【para 3- 組2: 剩余四項運動組——特征相似,都是橙色柱子(participating項)超過藍色柱子(watching項)。于是乎,寫作篇幅也被壓縮了?!?/strong>
A common situation could be found in the four remaining sports, basketball, football, cycling and walking. Specifically, the percentages of audiences watching them were within a narrow range of 8% to 20%, while the participation rates were all slightly larger, with the figures ranging from 15% to 25%.
語言點小結:
1. 同位語成分
2. With引導的獨立主格結構
【para 4-結尾】
To sum up, male spectators were more likely to take part in these six types of sports that are studied than were they to watch them, with an exception found in tennis.
語言點小結:
1. 詞匯替換
2. 定語從句
3. 倒裝結構
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