支招小作文（115） | 線圖（數(shù)據(jù)型圖表）2022.10.22真題 四國醫(yī)療服務(wù)滿意度

線圖（數(shù)據(jù)型圖表）2022.10.22真題 四國醫(yī)療服務(wù)滿意度

The graph below shows the level of satisfaction for health care in four countries in three different years. 

【首段: 簡要陳述線圖的核心內(nèi)容—“連續(xù)時(shí)間”的變化情況】

The lines illustrate how individuals’ satisfaction with health care changed in the UK, Germany, France and Spain over a period of 2001 to 2021.

【主體段1：UK & France—變化相近，同為滿意度攀升】

A common situation was observed in the UK and France, as people became increasingly satisfied with the healthcare condition. One soared constantly from 70% to 90%, taking the lead by 2021, while the other continued to rise after a 5-percent marginal drop between 2001 and 2011.

[主體段內(nèi)容按照“總-分”結(jié)構(gòu)展開]

注意：“程度修飾詞”和“變化類動詞”的使用

【主體段2：Spain & Germany—變化差異大】

By stark contrast, there was a disparity between the two remainders. Most notably, with the percentage staying at below 65%, Spain witnessed the lowest level of content in the given period. This contrasted sharply with the change in the figure for Germany, a consistent and moderate drop from 85% to 70%. It is also worth mentioning that the level of Germany fell under that of the UK after 2011 and that of France after 2016, despite the leading position it had in 2001. 

寫作內(nèi)容小結(jié)：

1. 段落之間的銜接

2. 詞匯：Disparity n. 懸殊的差異

3. 程度修飾詞的使用（adj. & adv.）

4.使 用同位語

【結(jié)尾】

To sum up, healthcare received the worst evaluation in Spain, while the evaluation in the three remainders varied from year to year.