支招小作文（112） | 線圖 造訪小島的游客

【類型】線圖（數(shù)據(jù)型圖表）

破題： 

1. 觀察三條線之間的異同點【相同點：變化趨勢，不同點：高低位置+變化幅度】2. 線圖分組【組1: 游客總數(shù)的線 2.具體兩種游客的線】

Depicted in the graph are the changing trends of the number of vacationers to a specific Caribbean island over a period of 2010 to 2017. 

關(guān)注主題詞匯替換vacationers 

A substantial overall rise (1 million to 3.5 million) could be observed in the total number of visitors during the given period, despite the stagnation between 2015 and 2016. To break the growth of the total down to the two specific groups of visitors, one group grew from 0.7 million to 1.5 million, and the other from 0.3 million to 2 million. 

句：該句傳遞了豐富的信息，即總數(shù)整體上升，盡管在個別年份上，其數(shù)值存在稍許停滯。

第二句：體現(xiàn)對比關(guān)系，闡明表示總數(shù)的線和表示具體兩種游客的線之間的聯(lián)系。

During the initial years, visitors were more likely to stay on the island than were they to stay on cruise ships. It is also notable that the gap narrowed gradually between these two types of visitors in the subsequent years until 2016, as the number of landed visitors stabilized at 1.5 million between 2013 and 2015 and started to slide, while that of cruising visitors presented a continuous boom. With the continuous boom subsequently, staying on cruise ships became people’s first choice, despite the growth in the number of landed visitors.

寫作要點小結(jié)：

1. 關(guān)注句子主語的替換

2. 關(guān)注描述變化趨勢的動詞（及其變形）

3. 關(guān)注主題詞匯（landed visitors/ cruising visitors）

4. 句型的使用（倒裝句，包含形式主語的名詞性從句，狀語從句）

To sum up, the island had become increasingly popular, since increases were found in two types of visit.

結(jié)尾段落：關(guān)注狀語從句的使用