支招小作文（111） | 雙餅組合 2022.9.17 考題解析

【2022.9.17 task 1—數(shù)據(jù)圖：圖形組合—餅圖+餅圖】

The charts below show the percentages of forest area and the percentage of timbers produced in six regions in 2010.

Shown in the pair of pies are six areas in terms of their proportion of wooded lands and the production of timber ensuing from it. The year of 2010 is investigated. 

注意首句的倒裝現(xiàn)象。

注意詞匯：不及物動(dòng)詞ensue (from)

In 2010, it is most notable that South America stood out for its particularly high level of vegetation, with approximately one third of wooded areas. Russia- with 25% of its region occupied by forests – was the second largest forest owner. These two regions contrasted sharply with all others – Asia, Africa, Europe and North America – whose districts of forests ranged from 8% to15%.

三句話呈現(xiàn)個(gè)餅的特征。

句話，使用形式主語，突出數(shù)值，然后跟上獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)補(bǔ)充說明百分比。

第二句用了常規(guī)主語，但是在句式設(shè)計(jì)上加入了巧思，把介紹百分比的內(nèi)容寫成了插入的語法形式，整句話表達(dá)的意思是“Russia 是第二大森林所有地區(qū)”; 同時(shí), 這一特征的總結(jié)“ the second largest ”構(gòu)建了與句之間的聯(lián)系。

第三句話主語使用指代詞，于是使該句與前兩句話構(gòu)建了聯(lián)系。賓語部分使用同位語，將圖中出現(xiàn)的地區(qū)名稱作完整解釋。最后，使用定語從句，給出余下各區(qū)域的數(shù)值區(qū)間。

詞匯上注意 “owner”，類似擬人。

Of all those forest owners, two major manufacturers of timber were Russia and South America. Their productions made up 25% and 22% respectively, and either percentage was roughly equivalent to that of the productions of North America and Europe combined. It is also worth mentioning that timber yielded by Asia and Africa were of almost the same amount. 

主語的多樣：三個(gè)句子的主語各不相同。

避免單一且重復(fù)的表達(dá)，即列舉“什么地區(qū)產(chǎn)出了多少木材”。

第三句是形式主語替代主語從句。

詞匯上注意 “manufacturers”，類似擬人。

Overall, the differences are apparent between one region and another in both the exploitation of forests and the production of timber.

詞匯：exploitation 開發(fā)；利用