支招小作文（109） | 又見大表“哥”（格）2022.9.3 考場真題

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2022.9.3考場小作文真題

The table below shows the consumption of four kinds of dairy products per person per year and their changes in percentage in Australia from 2011 to 2015.

【此圖的考核要點(diǎn)：同項(xiàng)不同時(shí)，連續(xù)時(shí)間（線性變化）類】

數(shù)值分組加工，確定寫作內(nèi)容：

1.Milk vs Butter— 所有年份中的“值 vs 最小值”；前者數(shù)值變化小，后者變化更顯著

2.Cheese vs Yogurt — 數(shù)值變化幅度較小，且后者是數(shù)值減少的項(xiàng)目

【Introduction: 概述圖表大致內(nèi)容—連續(xù)五年間（2011-2015），四類乳制品消耗量的變化】

The table illustrates the changing amount of four categories of dairy products consumed in Australia over a five-year period of 2011 to 2015.

【Body 1: 主體段拆解分析具體數(shù)值情況。主體段落一：先分析Milk特征，即“消耗量，遠(yuǎn)超其他三類產(chǎn)品”】

Milk was most notable among the four products because its consumption far exceeded those of the remainders. [用狀語從句引出數(shù)據(jù)之間的關(guān)系作為語法亮點(diǎn)] In Australia, over 100 litres of milk were consumed each year, with merely 1% growth found. [獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)] By stark contrast, despite a 8-percent steep growth, people consumed a particularly small portion of butter, whose figure ranged from 3.6 kg to 4 kg. [定語從句]

remainder n. 剩余物

steep adj. 急劇的 [使用程度修飾詞，細(xì)化增減幅度的比較]

【Body 2: 接下來，分析剩余兩類產(chǎn)品】

In terms of the consumption of cheese and yogurt, there was a different situation. Specifically, although cheese ranked below milk, with a moderate amount eaten, it was the only category whose figure stayed constant at around 13.6 kg. [定語從句] Similarly, the initial four years witnessed the consistent level of yogurt purchased by each individual, at 7.4 kg, while a slight drop was observed in 2015, when the figure declined by 0.2 kg. [定語從句]

moderate adj. 中等的

consistent adj. 不變的

【Conclusion: 結(jié)尾部分，給出對表格內(nèi)容的宏觀總結(jié)】

Overall, individuals in Australia showed greatest preference for milk, while the other three items were much less desirable. 

desirable adj. 渴望獲得的