支招小作文（104） | 表格 三家醫(yī)院的滿意度

表格 三家醫(yī)院的滿意度 – 2021.03.04真題

The table below gives information about the patients’ evaluation of three hospitals in four different aspects. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

* 數(shù)據(jù)圖：【表格】

* 此圖為【同時(shí)不同項(xiàng)】：比較關(guān)系存在于橫向四個(gè)不同方面間，也存在于縱向三家醫(yī)院間。

【開頭段】

Shown in the table is patients’ satisfaction with three hospitals from four different aspects. 

● 句開頭的【倒裝】。注意動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)由倒置后的主語(yǔ)決定。

【主體部分第1段】

寫主體段前，先對(duì)表格信息進(jìn)行分組：找異同點(diǎn)。觀察可發(fā)現(xiàn)，前兩列三家醫(yī)院的數(shù)據(jù)存在差距，而后兩列的數(shù)據(jù)相對(duì)平衡。

In terms of service aftercare and treating, the evaluation of patients in three hospitals approximatedto each other.  總——分，遞進(jìn)  The former aspect is notable: there was a minute gap among the percentages, whose range was between 70% and 83%. Likewise, the discrepancy regarding the latter aspect was a bit wider, [獨(dú)立主格] with the rates varying from 68% to 85%.

● 句和后面的句子是【總——分】和【遞進(jìn)】關(guān)系。

● 【注意以下 常見單詞不常見的詞義】

● approximate to vi. 接近，近似

● minute adj. 極小的

【主體部分第2段】寫表格中的其它數(shù)值。

By stark contrast, there was a disparity among the assessment of three hospitals in two remaining aspects. The hospital staff won the approval of about three quarters of patients in hospital A and over four fifths in hospital C, while merely less than two fifths of patients were content with hospital B’s workers. Similarly, almost all the patients in hospital C were satisfied with the waiting time, while two remainders only contented nearly a half of their patients.  

● 段與段之間的銜接也要做好

● 注意【現(xiàn)象描述】的寫法，而不是單純羅列數(shù)據(jù)

● 注意【程度副詞的使用】

● disparity n.[C] 不同；懸殊（自帶huge的程度）

【結(jié)尾段】

Overall, hospital C received the best evaluation, while the two remainders were less satisfactory.