支招小作文（98） | 柱表 兩個年份機(jī)動車數(shù)量

* 柱+表，選自2021.3.6筆試真題回憶

Writing Task 1:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the numbers of registered road vehicles in use in a European country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

閱讀提示：

* 數(shù)據(jù)圖：【柱圖】+【表格】

* 柱圖涉及時間變化，為“兩時間點(diǎn)”題型，重點(diǎn)在項目間、兩個年份間數(shù)據(jù)的“比較”。

* 【兩時間點(diǎn)】的題型，不存在明顯的線性關(guān)系，不宜出現(xiàn)“趨勢”的表述，建議采用趨勢詞的名詞形式。

* 【表格】部分為“變化的百分比”，建議融合進(jìn)柱圖描述。

【開頭段】

Shown in the bar chart and the table are the number of five categories of registered vehicles in 1996 and 2006, and the percentage change of each category over the same time.

【主體部分第1段】上升種類

Private cars and other types were the two leading categories, both witnessing an increase in the number. Specifically, the former stood out, as it dominated in automobile industry, with more or less 20 million. Though there were merely over 1 million other types of vehicles registered, the number experienced a greater increase than the former one did, 58% compared with 24%.

【主體部分第2段】其他種類

By stark contrast, the scenarios regarding the remainders were rather different. The following two categories - motorcycles and lorries – were roughly 0.6 million fewer than other types, and their numbers both showed a fall, with the decrease rate of the former (40%) twice larger than that of the latter (20%). Lastly, it is noteworthy that the decade saw no change in bus, coach, and taxi, whose number ranked the last, with 0.1 million in both years.

本圖分組比較容易，可以按變化分組。

主語的多樣性，可保證句式重復(fù)度降低。

the former, the latter也可作為一種指代方式，滿足CC的得分。

個劃線處句法結(jié)構(gòu)：讓步狀語從句+主句+獨(dú)立主格

第二個劃線處句法結(jié)構(gòu)：句1（主系表，中間通過短破折插入two categories的同位語）+ and連接句2（主謂賓）+with引導(dǎo)的獨(dú)立主格

【結(jié)尾段】

Overall, the number of registered private cars far dwarfed that of other categories in both years.

dwarf vt. (相比之下)使顯得矮小，使相形見絀

結(jié)尾段特征，可以無視之前的分組依據(jù)，再縱觀全圖，看特征。