6月3日雅思大作文示范寫(xiě)作 | 老人缺乏鍛煉的原因與解決方法

2023年6月3日雅思大作文題目

Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but few of them take enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what can be done to encourage them to take exercise?(2023/06/03)

范文及解析

Introduction

Taking regular exercise, as is universally acknowledged, plays midwife to helping old people keep physical fitness, while most of them, in spite of strong recommendation from doctors, still fail to take ample exercises. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my own perspective, are three predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.

解析

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? play midwife to v.促成;幫助；

? ticklish adj.不安定的；難對(duì)付的；

? viable adj.可望成功的，切實(shí)可行的；

? avert v.防止，避免；

? bleak adj.不樂(lè)觀的；

Body 1

Primarily, much as many elders are pleased to enjoy their twilight years, it does not look feasible since most youngsters, bread winners in families, are swamped with work under this cut-throat competition,under which circumstance, their parents will voluntarily help them with chores and minister to their grandchildren. Consequently, hardly do they have sufficient time to take sports. Another major contributing factor would have much to do with the transformed lifestyles of the elderly. Unlike the past when people have limited forms of entertainment, the current digital era is saturated with intriguing activities, ranging from surfing the internet to shooting off to see amusing videos, which tightly grip the old's attention. Benefited from its online convenience and diversity, the old will be indisposed to step out for exercises. Undeniable is also the fact that the lack of tailored recreational amenities in the vicinity of residence will dampen the the old's zeal for taking sports. To illustrate, with a swimming pool being kilometers away, swimming would only be a wild wish.

解析

Causes：

(1)年輕人忙碌，老人需要幫助照顧家庭，帶孩子；

(2)老人在現(xiàn)代生活中的生活方式也有明顯變化；

(3)缺乏適合老年人運(yùn)動(dòng)鍛煉的基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施；

? feasible  adj.可行的，辦得到的；

? be swamped with v.忙著做;忙的一塌糊涂；

? cut-throat adj.（競(jìng)爭(zhēng)）殘酷的，激烈的；

? minister to v.照顧；援助；

? be saturated with v.使充滿，使飽和；

? intriguing adj.非常有趣的，引人入勝的；

? grip v.使感興趣，吸引?。橙耍┑淖⒁猓?/p>

? be indisposed to v.不愿意；      

? tailor v.定做；迎合，使適應(yīng)；

? amenity n.便利設(shè)施；

? vicinity n.周?chē)貐^(qū)，鄰近地區(qū)，附近；

? dampen v.減弱，抑制；

Body 2

In order to address the prickly problem of inadequate physical exercise among elderly, the government should play a leading role by earmarking funds to proffering more age-appropriate sports facilities with either installing handrails or perfecting walking path ,which are expected to give the old easier access to recreational areas, opening up more opportunities for them to join in activities like jogging and hiking. Apart from fiscal policy from the government, disseminating information through public service advertising, community centers and senior organizations is also of tangible boons in boosting the awareness concerning the significance of physical health. Besides, young adults, instead of being boomerang children, are supposed to shoulder more family responsibility for the care of older people is firmly within the domain of the family.

解析

Solutions：

(1)政府起主導(dǎo)作用，投資完善運(yùn)動(dòng)設(shè)施，定制一些適合老年人鍛煉的器材；

(2)宣傳以提升老人鍛煉的思想意識(shí)；

(3)年輕人要學(xué)會(huì)承擔(dān)更大的家庭責(zé)任；

? prickly adj.多刺的；棘手的；

? earmark vt.指定……的用途；劃撥（款項(xiàng)）；

? proffer v.遞上；提供，提出；

? disseminate v.散布，傳播（信息、知識(shí)等）；

? tangible adj.明確的，真實(shí)的；

? boon n.裨益，優(yōu)勢(shì)，有用的東西；

? boomerang children 回歸子女；啃老族；

Conclusion

In conclusion, barriers for the lack of sufficient exercise among the older individuals are various and the thorny issue should not be downplayed. By tailoring exercise facilities and elevating their awareness, older generations will be more likely to engage in regular physical activities.

解析

總結(jié)前文信息；重申觀點(diǎn)。