5月27日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 社會(huì)貢獻(xiàn)與收入高低

2023年5月27日雅思大作文題目

Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make greater contributions to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

一些人說專業(yè)工作者，如醫(yī)生、護(hù)士和教師，他們對社會(huì)的貢獻(xiàn)更大，應(yīng)該比那些在體育和娛樂領(lǐng)域的人得到更多的報(bào)酬。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

 

范文及解析

Introduction

It is true that stipend of skilled workers, ranging from practitioners and nurses to teachers  and engineers, is not on par with that of first-league celebrities in either sports or entertainment sector. Whereas there is still no consensus over justification for this stark contrast.

 

解析

的確，從醫(yī)生、護(hù)士到教師和工程師，技術(shù)工人的津貼與體育或娛樂界的一線明星相比都是不一樣的。然而，對于這種鮮明對比的正當(dāng)性，仍然沒有達(dá)成共識。面對這個(gè)千年老題，烤鴨需冷靜對”greater contribution to the society”進(jìn)行具體對比論證。其次，需討論其長遠(yuǎn)社會(huì)意義。

? stipend 薪資 n.

? practitioners 醫(yī)學(xué)界從業(yè)人員 n.

? be on par with  與某物同等水平

? first-league celebrities 一線名人

? no consensus over 尚未達(dá)成共識

 

Body 1

Those advocating a higher pay for well-qualified workers argue that a competitive earning bears testimony to criticality of certain professions to a society, whose sustainable development is anchored in public health, education of next generation as well as public utilities. Catering for tangible living needs of general public, the above-mentioned sectors seem to cast a long shadow on euphoria elicited from pop culture or athletic performance that surpass all previous records. Further, it is worried that a low pay could throw cold water on pliable minds who are eager to embark on professional career paths where prolonged years of intense academic study is a prerequisite. There could be a disheartening sequel to a sapped enthusiasm; a shortage of labor pool in teaching, nursing, medical treatment or civil engineering could turn up.

 

解析

那些主張?zhí)岣吒咚刭|(zhì)工人工資的人認(rèn)為，有競爭力的收入證明了某些職業(yè)對社會(huì)的重要性，而社會(huì)的可持續(xù)發(fā)展取決于公共衛(wèi)生、下一代教育以及公用事業(yè)。迎合大眾有形生活需求的上述領(lǐng)域，似乎給超越歷史紀(jì)錄的流行文化或運(yùn)動(dòng)成績帶來的欣快感投下了長長的陰影。此外，人們還擔(dān)心，低工資可能會(huì)給那些渴望走上專業(yè)職業(yè)道路的人潑上冷水，而長期的高強(qiáng)度學(xué)術(shù)學(xué)習(xí)是先決條件。熱情消退后可能會(huì)出現(xiàn)令人沮喪的結(jié)局;教學(xué)、護(hù)理、醫(yī)療或土木工程方面的勞動(dòng)力短缺可能會(huì)出現(xiàn)。

? well-qualified workers 技術(shù)員工

?bears testimony to 證明某事的存在/ testimony （法庭上的）證詞

? criticality 緊急程度 n.

? be anchored in 扎根于 anchor v./n. 錨

? public utilities 公共設(shè)施，如供電供水公共交通等

? cast a long shadow on 使某事變得暗淡/勝過 cast v.投擲

? euphoria elicited from 短暫的欣喜euphoria n./ elicit 得到

? throw cold water on 潑冷水/打擊某人的積極性

? pliable minds 青少年 pliable易于改變的 adj.

? embark on professional career paths 從事專業(yè)性的職業(yè)

? prerequisite 前提 n.

? sequel 續(xù)集 n.表示后果

? a shortage of labor pool 勞動(dòng)力短缺 labor pool 勞動(dòng)力

? turn up 出現(xiàn)

 

Body 2

However, it is absurd to devalue entertainment and sports worker whose performance is tailored to popular tastes, whether be rejoicing for creative arts or gusto for witnessing adrenalin-packed Super Bowl games. This excitement, being a getaway from one’s humdrum existence, could be scantly blanked out in societies which are already economically successful. Also, neglecting rarity of sports and showbiz professionals, standouts among a tiny fragment of population, is akin to renouncing their dwindling physical capacity and thus a relatively shorter career. That being said, a hefty pay is a vindication of complexity of their talent.

 

解析

但是，無論是為創(chuàng)造藝術(shù)而高興，還是為觀看令人興奮的超級碗比賽而興奮，貶低符合大眾口味的娛樂、體育工作者，都是荒謬的。這種興奮，作為一個(gè)人逃離單調(diào)生活的一種方式，在經(jīng)濟(jì)上已經(jīng)成功的社會(huì)中是很難被忽視的。此外，忽視體育和娛樂圈專業(yè)人士的稀缺性，在一小部分人口中脫穎而出，就相當(dāng)于放棄他們?nèi)找鏈p少的身體能力，從而放棄相對較短的職業(yè)生涯。話雖如此，豐厚的薪酬證明了他們才華的復(fù)雜性。

? absurd 荒謬的 adj.

? devalue 貶低 v.

? tailored to 為某事量身定做 tailor 裁縫 n.

? rejoicing 歡慶 n.

? gusto 興致 n.

? adrenalin-packed Super Bowl games 腎上腺素爆滿的超級碗比賽 adrenalin 腎上腺素 n.

? getaway 逃離 n.

? humdrum existence 單調(diào)生活 humdrum 乏味的 adj.

? scantly 僅僅 adv.

? blanked out 劃掉/排除

? rarity 稀有度 n.

? is akin to 類似于

? renounce 拒絕/摒棄 v.

? dwindling physical capacity 日漸衰落的身體素質(zhì)

? That being said 所以/ 換句話說

? a hefty pay 高工資 hefty 大量的

? vindication of 證明 n.

 

Ending paragraph

In conclusion, salary in this age is mainly determined by an occupation’s criticality, rarity, and complexity, and so-called unfair division of payroll is a gross exaggeration, when it comes to well-qualified labor and icons in sports and entertainment.

 

解析

總之，這個(gè)時(shí)代的工資主要取決于職業(yè)的重要性、稀缺性和復(fù)雜性，而所謂的不公平的工資分配是一種夸張的說法，當(dāng)涉及到高素質(zhì)的勞動(dòng)力和體育和娛樂領(lǐng)域的偶像時(shí)。

? is mainly determined by 主要被某物所決定

? unfair division of payroll 工資的不公平分配  payroll 工資 n.

? a gross exaggeration 夸大其詞