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2023年5月13日雅思大作文題目

Nowadays, celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

范文及解析

Introduction

Idolizing stars in either entertainments or sports industry is common among youngsters today, while this faddism has been frowned upon by skeptics who argue that these household names are simply well known for their charm and money instead of concrete accomplishment.

解析

如今，名人更出名的是他們的魅力和財(cái)富，而不是他們的成就，這給年輕人樹立了一個(gè)不好的榜樣。你在多大程度上同意或不同意這種說法? 名人影響話題經(jīng)典題目，最近一次出現(xiàn)在2020年12月。注意先探討題目中的前提 more famous for glamour and wealth than accomplishments是否合理,再勘查他們是否對年輕人構(gòu)成負(fù)面影響。

? Idolizing stars 追星

? Faddism n.趕時(shí)髦

? Be frowned upon 被不贊成

? Skeptics n. 懷疑論者

Body 1

Granted, there is a proliferation of fame due to pervasive use of virtual social media. Aiming for huge social media following, some movie stars or pop stars capitalize on selfies of one’s sensational figure in a tiny dress or posing for a lavish lifestyle. This gimmick is also used by millionaire influencer who target to be Internet sensation. Therefore, it is absurd to overlook its repercussions over teenagers who are daily users of YouTube and Twitter, with the worst-case scenario being falling prey to eating disorder or consumerism.

解析

分析憑借魅力和財(cái)富出名的情況。虛擬社交媒體讓電影明星和流行明星輕松出名，其中不乏博主。其中炫耀的露骨身材以及豪華生活方式對年輕人造成很大危害。

? Proliferation  n.激增

? Huge social media following 巨量的社交媒體粉絲

? Capitalize on selfies 利用自拍照 capitalize on利用

? Posing for a lavish lifestyle 奢華的生活方式

? Gimmick n.把戲（貶義）

? Internet sensation 網(wǎng)絡(luò)風(fēng)云人物

? Repercussions n.長期負(fù)面影響

? Eating disorder n. 飲食紊亂癥 bulimia暴食癥/anorexia厭食癥

Body 2

However, it is not entirely fair to blame these public figures for setting a bad example for young adults; huge earning and charm are a justification for their hard work. Olympic medalists serve as a perfect example, who in all probability undergo years of intensive physical training. Similarly, business leaders who reach tycoon status have put in lots of late nights and weekends to build their business, with no certainty of success. The above-mentioned qualities undoubtedly are instrumental for one’s adulthood, paving the way for further development in either personal life, academia or career.

解析

但并非所有公眾人物都起著消極影響。巨大財(cái)富和魅力其實(shí)是對他們的付出的一種衍生品。奧運(yùn)會獲獎?wù)咭约吧虡I(yè)大亨作為例子，說明常見累月的訓(xùn)練以及工作是成功必須。

? Public figures 公眾人物

? Huge earning 巨額收入

? Justification 合理化解釋 A is a justification for B

? Olympic medalist 奧運(yùn)會獲獎?wù)?/p>

? Intensive physical training 集中訓(xùn)練

? Reach tycoon status 達(dá)到大亨地位

? With no certainty of success沒有成功的確定性的情況下

? Instrumental adj.有幫助的

Ending paragraph

My view is that although sensationalizing icons’ image by displaying wealth or status has been possible by various online communication, stating that their implications are solely negative would be a gross exaggeration.

解析

結(jié)尾表明個(gè)人看法，即名人的名望越發(fā)基于財(cái)富與形象，但是宣稱其影響全部為消極實(shí)為夸大其詞。

? Sensationalize v.炒作

? Implication n.影響

? A gross exaggeration 夸大其詞