5月6日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 政府是否應(yīng)該資助所有藝術(shù)家

2023年5月6日雅思大作文題目

Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists, including painters, musicians and poets. However, other people think that this a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(2023/05/06)

范文及解析

Introduction

People have different views about the funding of artists. While some people are a strong believer in the claim that all artists deserve financial assistance from the government, I can hardly find myself in agreement with such a statement .

解析

題目基本形式是雙邊觀點(diǎn)，話題集中在政府投資和藝術(shù)；審題需要注意化表達(dá)all，整個(gè)題目的處理邏輯就應(yīng)該是政府資助有道理，但是不應(yīng)該資助所有的，因?yàn)闀?huì)產(chǎn)生經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)；

Body 1

People who tend to embrace the government funding for art have their own persuasive arguments. Artworks, as is argued by them, contribute to the enrichment of people’s spiritual lives. For instance, paying a visit to a particular museum or going to a concert of a beloved singer play a role in washing away the fatigue in the bustling life. Moreover, arts represent culture, heritage and history, and some of them act as landmarks of the city or a country, which not only serve to educate people but also boost the tourism. Local councils, accordingly, shoulder the responsibility to provide financial support for the creative artists, encouraging them to create masterpieces, without which cities would lose the vitality and become less attractive.

解析

政府應(yīng)該資助藝術(shù)家：

(1) 藝術(shù)豐富人們的精神生活；

(2) 藝術(shù)是社會(huì)文化，歷史的一部分，促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展；

? bustling adj.熙熙攘攘的，忙亂的;

? boost v.使增長(zhǎng)，推動(dòng)；

? accordingly adv.因此，所以;

? masterpieces n.代表作，杰作；

? vitality n.活力，熱情；生機(jī)，生命力;

Body 2

Nevertheless, personally, apportioning financial assistance to all artists is ludicrous. The artists themselves, indisputably, are the direct beneficiaries for their pursuit of art and perseverance on their ambitions, be it achieving financial freedom or enjoying crowning glory, which is hardly justifiable for the government to take full onus. Furthermore, the full responsibility engenders a heavy economic load on governments. Given the finite budget, the government should give top priority to fields closely intertwined with people’s livelihood such as perfecting social welfare system, enhancing infrastructure and ironing out ticklish social issues, namely environment deterioration and poverty. Education and technology, two driving forces for a country’s prosperity in contemporary society, also cannot be downplayed. If the government covers assistance to all kinds of  artists, the strides of these domains will be stymied because of funding shortfalls, thus impairing overall national strength.

解析

但是，我個(gè)人認(rèn)為政府資助所有的藝術(shù)家是很不合理的；

(1) 投身藝術(shù)，藝術(shù)家自己是最直接的受益體，不管是獲取到財(cái)富上的自由還是享有至高的榮譽(yù)；

(2) 政府資金有限，應(yīng)該優(yōu)先考慮人們的基本生活，同時(shí)關(guān)注教育和科技，保障社會(huì)繁榮富強(qiáng)；

? apportion vt.分配，分派；

? ludicrous adj.滑稽的；荒唐的

? beneficiary n.受益者，受惠人；

? crowning adj.的；無(wú)比的

? onus n.責(zé)任，義務(wù)；

? engender v.產(chǎn)生，引起;

? give top priority to 優(yōu)先考慮；

? ticklish adj.不安定的，不穩(wěn)定的；難對(duì)付的；

? deterioration n.惡化；

? stride n.步速；進(jìn)展，進(jìn)步；

? stymie vt.從中作梗，阻撓；妨礙；

Conclusion

To recapitulate, notwithstanding the boons in subsidizing artists, limited financial resources need to be allotted more rationally with more importance being attached to people’s basic lives and constant prosperity and thriving of the country.

解析

? recapitulate vi.概括；重述要點(diǎn)；摘要

? notwithstanding prep.雖然，盡管

? boon n.裨益，優(yōu)勢(shì)，有用的東西;

總結(jié)前文信息；重申觀點(diǎn)。