4月22日雅思大作文示范寫(xiě)作 | 經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展帶來(lái)的好與壞

2023年4月22日雅思大作文題目

Many countries aim to improve people’s living standards through economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?(2023/04/22)

范文及解析

Introduction

In some parts of the world, owing to the economic boom, people’s living standard has been largely improved, while such a development also leads to the loss of some significant social values. Personally, the demerits of economic blossom can be offset by its merits.

解析

本題本質(zhì)討論經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展帶來(lái)的好與壞，看似簡(jiǎn)單，但是審題需要注意題目信息中出現(xiàn)了兩個(gè)限定信息improve people’s living standards 和 social values are lost;這兩個(gè)信息點(diǎn)必須要在討論優(yōu)缺利弊的過(guò)程中提及并同時(shí)注意對(duì)于social values 的正確理解；

? boom n.繁榮；

? offset v.補(bǔ)償，抵銷(xiāo)；

Body 1

Generally，the prosperity of economy contributes positively not only to people’s material in daily lives but the spiritual enrichment. Materially, economic development serves as an indispensable catalyst for creating jobs, mitigating poverty. Accordingly, people can afford better clothing and footwear, enjoy a rich feast of all delicacies, live in spacious houses as well as get the latest electronic gadgets. Meanwhile,thanks to fatter tax collections as the economy recovers, strides can be made by the government in perfecting social welfare system and enhancing infrastructure. Mentally, when citizens get satisfaction in matter life, highly civilized spiritual life has become what people pursue. In the past, never would the general public imagine going to a movie, a concert or a museum, but now, with abundant materials benefited from economic growth, such cultural consumption can be easily accessible.

解析

經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展提升人們的整體生活水平：

(1) 物質(zhì)上：經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展創(chuàng)造工作機(jī)會(huì)，解決貧困問(wèn)題，人們能穿更好的衣物，吃更豐富的食物，住更大的房子，享有新潮電子產(chǎn)品；同時(shí)享受更好的社會(huì)福利，基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施建設(shè)；

(2) 精神上：物質(zhì)生活得到滿(mǎn)足，追求精神生活，可以看電影聽(tīng)演唱會(huì)；

? indispensable adj.不可或缺的，必需的；

? catalyst n.誘因，誘導(dǎo)者；

? mitigate v.減輕，緩和；

? a feast of 豐盛的;

? delicacy n.美味，佳肴；

? electronic gadget 數(shù)碼產(chǎn)品；電子產(chǎn)品；

? stride n.大步，進(jìn)展，進(jìn)步；

? perfect v.完善，使完美；

Body 2

Undeniably, accelerated economic development is a chief culprit for the erosion of some important social values. Primarily, economic development render people more rapacious financially , which occasions excessive exploitation of natural resources with a view to satiating the infinite needs of industrial production. Sadly, many people, when lured by colossal economic incentive, would turn a blind eye to the environmental deterioration. Worse still, economic accumulation would tempt people to seek other irrational excuses to obtain materialistic satisfaction which includes luxuries like fancy handbags and limousines with whopping price. In this case, the weight on economic prosperity and consumerism , a devastating blow to traditional values such as frugality, is bound to shape a money-oriented society . 

解析

也不可否認(rèn)，經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展確實(shí)帶來(lái)了一定的問(wèn)題：

(1) 為了發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)，大肆消耗自然資源，沒(méi)有環(huán)保意識(shí)；

(2) 當(dāng)人們一味追求物質(zhì)，物質(zhì)社會(huì)便會(huì)產(chǎn)生，人們也會(huì)越來(lái)越不看重珍貴的社會(huì)價(jià)值例如勤儉節(jié)約；

? accelerate v.（使）加快，促進(jìn)；

? culprit n.誘因，誘導(dǎo)者；罪魁禍?zhǔn)祝?/p>

? infinite adj.無(wú)限的，無(wú)窮盡的；

? colossal adj.巨大的

? deterioration n.惡化

? accumulation n.積累，堆積；

? whopping adj.巨大的；天大的；異常的;

? limousine n. 豪華轎車(chē)

? devastating adj.毀滅性的，極具破壞力的；

? blow n.大風(fēng)，強(qiáng)風(fēng)；

? frugality n.節(jié)約

? be bound to 勢(shì)必會(huì)

Conclusion

To recapitulate, notwithstanding the disadvantage economic development gives rise to in disintegrating certain social values, by apportioning resources , the government can strike a balance between economic development and the retention of the cultural identities.

解析

? disintegrate v.崩潰，瓦解；破裂，粉碎；

? apportion vt.分配，分派；

? strike a balance 公平處理

? retention n.保持，保留；保存，

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