3月25日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 看電視對小孩子是好是壞

2023年3月25日雅思大作文題目

Some people think watching TV is bad for children in every way. Others think it is good for developing children as they grow up. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.(2023/03/25)

范文及解析

Introduction

With the advent of information age, watching TV becomes one of the most common recreational activities for people with no exception for children. While some people are a strident advocate in the claim that TV is an unhealthy tool, I personally believe children can enjoy tangible boons brought by TV programs. 

解析

本次task2重復去年12月份的考題；題目內(nèi)容上很簡單，本質就是論述看電視的積極與消極影響，注意題目中限定對象是“children”，論證需要簡單結合孩子的特征；同時in every way是屬于化的表述；

? strident adj.堅定的；

? tangible adj. 實際的；可觸及的；

? boons n.優(yōu)勢；有用的東西；

Body 1

Opponents voice their concern toward the detrimental impacts watching television may exert on children’s physical fitness as well as psychological well-being. With excessive exposure to screens, children not only are likely to be subjected to poor eyesight , but have the inclination to struggle with health problems such as back pain and obesity owing to the lack of adequate exercise. Worse yet, TV programs give easy access to unfavorable information like violence and pornography. Putting young children who are mentally immature into contact with these contents without parental guide will lead to mental problems and even result in juvenile delinquency. Another dark side would be the slide in academic performance brought about by deep addition to the virtual world. Young children, if they are glued to such gadgets, will seldom plough into their studies , hindering them from making progress on learning.

解析

看電視對小孩子造成很多不好的影響：

(1)對身體健康的危害；

(2)對心理健康的危害，進一步影響孩子的行為甚至可能造成青少年犯罪；

(3)造成學習成績下滑；

? detrimental adj.有害的；不良的；

? be subjected to v.受到；經(jīng)受；

? have the inclination v.有可能；

? struggle with v.與...斗爭；

? pornography n.色情描寫；

? juvenile delinquency n.青少年犯罪；

? are glued to v.沉溺于；

? gadgets n.產(chǎn)品；器件；

? plough into v.努力做；投入；

? hinder v.阻礙；

Body 2

In my personal opinion, however, watching television can be of paramount importance in educating children. With a sea of information on TV, children’s infinite potential for learning can be excavated, sparking their interest and expanding their horizon. For instance, current events keep children up to date about what is happening around the world instantaneously. Animal World is a program where children can be furnished with knowledge concerning animal classification, animal behavior and animal conservation. Additionally, watching TV can have positive and therapeutic effects on unleashing heavy load of pressure in study. To elaborate, children, trapped with bored study and endless exercises, can be refreshed and energetic by viewing certain entertainment activities, be it a cartoon or a typical reality show.

解析

轉折回應in every way;提出看電視對于孩子成長的意義：

(1) 電視節(jié)目中的海量信息可以激發(fā)孩子的學習情趣，學習潛能以及擴寬孩子的視野；

(2) 幫助孩子緩解學習壓力，是一種很好的娛樂方式；

? be of paramount importance 有重要作用；

? a sea of  海量的；

? instantaneously adv.即刻；

? be furnished with v.具有；配備有；

? therapeutic adj. 有療效的；

? unleash v.釋放；

Conclusion

To put it in a nutshell, in spite of being informative and amusing , by no means should we turn a blind eye to the baneful influences TV viewing may exert on children in terms of their physical and mental health. I believe a limit in time and content is of necessity for children to prevent them from being misled by questionable information. 

解析

? turn a blind eye to v.忽略；忽視；

總結前文從而重申觀點；看電視對于孩子來說有著一定的教育和娛樂意義，但電視帶來的消極影響不可以被忽視；對于時間和內(nèi)容的適當管控是很必要的，只有正確的使用才能讓電視成為孩子學習的有利工具。