2月25日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 長假期提高工作表現(xiàn)？

2023年2月25日雅思大作文題目

Employers should give their staffs at least four weeks’ vacation a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文及解析

Introduction

The length of yearly time-off varies from country to country. Some propose that an annual leave of four weeks should be arranged for employees, and I agree that such a policy can enhance workers’ performance.

解析

舊題重現(xiàn)。審題一定要注意「目的」：提高表現(xiàn)，即所有 應(yīng)該/不應(yīng)該 的理由，都要圍繞“是否改善工作表現(xiàn)”。立場：同意。

Body 1

Irrefutably, it is justifiable for some to assert that such a long vacation may bring certain losses. The most conspicuous one is that this may make workers suffer from post-holiday syndrome. To illustrate, excessive vacations may disrupt their daily routines and working habits, rendering it hard for them to rebuild or readapt to the previous established habits. It is a commonplace that workers usually feel dizzy or less self-motivated after long holidays, with their efficiency and productivity declining. However, those problems can be avoided as long as staffs have learned to adjust to their work schedule in advance. 

解析

<讓步-不應(yīng)該給長假>：節(jié)后綜合癥：打斷正常的生活作息和工作習(xí)慣，難以再次全身心投入工作。

Ø conspicuous adj. 明顯的

Ø post-holiday syndrome 節(jié)后綜合征

Ø disrupt vt. 打擾，打斷

Ø dizzy adj. 眩暈的

Ø self-motivated adj. 自我勉勵的，主動的

Body 2

As a matter of fact, such practice can in effect improve employees’ performance in work. For one thing, the legitimate leave will unwind and revitalise themselves. Workers often feel stressed and pressurised during long time work, and they thus need the time-off to smell the roses and recharge the batteries: accompanying their families to enhance both job and life satisfaction for instance. In this case, they are more energised and motivated after returning. Additionally, the four-week holiday also allows workers to either draw inspiration and spice up their lives by travelling around or enlarge the scope of knowledge and tap their latent potential via attending extra courses, both of which will make them more productive later in work.

解析

<立論-應(yīng)該有假期> 1. 緩解疲勞，放松身心 ??有利于工作；2. 利用長假期來旅行汲取靈感，或參與培訓(xùn)來自我提升??有利于工作

Ø legitimate adj. 合情合理的

Ø unwind v. 放松

Ø revitalise vt. 使充滿活力

Ø pressurise vt. 使受到壓力

Ø smell the roses 享受生活

Ø recharge the batteries 恢復(fù)體力

Ø energise v. 給（某人）增添能量

Ø spice up one’s lives 豐富生活

Ø tap one’s potential 挖掘潛力

Conclusion

In conclusion, employees ought to have long-time vacations to better their performance.

解析

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