2月4日雅思大作文示范寫(xiě)作 | 個(gè)人用水自由

2023年2月4日雅思大作文題目

Some people think they have right to use as much fresh water as they want. Others otherwise believe governments should strictly control the use of fresh water as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (2023/02/04)

范文及解析

Introduction

With the boom of population and blossom of industry, the demand for fresh water, a limited resource, has been surging at an alarming rate. Some people, accordingly, advocate to tighten the control over fresh water consumption, which is in contrast to the view that people are entitled to use water recklessly.

解析

本題是2016年的原題重現(xiàn)，形式是雙邊觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)，討論關(guān)于淡水資源使用的問(wèn)題；審題時(shí)需要注意前者觀點(diǎn)中的絕對(duì)化表達(dá)as much as they want 以及后者的tightly control的程度；

boom n.迅速發(fā)展
blossom n.繁盛，興旺
are entitled to v.享有
recklessly adv.魯莽地；不顧一切地

Body 1

Water, one of the most valuable natural resources on the earth, is the lifeblood of life and the link that binds all living beings on the planet. The public, as is argued by a group of people, should enjoy the basic right to access sufficient fresh water in their daily lives for domestic purposes, be it preparing food or doing the laundry. Additionally, the industrial production is in correspondingly more dependence on water resources, be it fueling the manufacture of commodities or contributing to the agricultural irrigation.  Without the unfettered access to water，people’s fundamental needs cannot be satisfied， which further spawns more life and social problems. The restricted use of water,for example, engenders less irrigation on agriculture, which will induce the deduction of food output, thereby triggering the latent threat of famine.

解析

水資源，生命的源泉，毋庸置疑對(duì)人類(lèi)以及其他生物的生存來(lái)說(shuō)都非常重要；無(wú)論是日常生活中人們的吃穿住用行還是社會(huì)工業(yè)生產(chǎn)都對(duì)水資源有著嚴(yán)重的依賴性；沒(méi)有足夠的水資源供給，人們的日常生活會(huì)受到影響同時(shí)社會(huì)各領(lǐng)域發(fā)展必將受到阻礙；

lifeblood n.生機(jī)的根源；生命必須的血液；
bind v.捆綁，系；包扎；使緊密聯(lián)系；
unfettered adj.自由的；無(wú)拘無(wú)束的；
spawn vt.釀成，造成;
engender vt.使產(chǎn)生；造成；
latent adj.（性質(zhì)，狀態(tài)）潛在的，隱藏的；

Body 2

Nonetheless, from my perspective, despite the indispensable role it plays, finite water resources, the fresh potable water in particular, could not bear lavish and infinite exploitation of we human beings. Meanwhile, A ballooning number of population has occasioned mushrooming water demands globally, but the awareness of water saving is lost when. A raft of people are seen using water prodigally in many cases such as watering bodies more than one hour or brushing their teeth with tap water running. Without conservation efforts, water scarcity is bound to be ticklish global issue. By this token, strict governance is of paramount significance in ensuring sustainable utilization of water. The government, as the one most capable and likely to address any social issues, is supposed to enact tougher laws and carry out relevant punishment such as imposing a price hike or heavy fine to accomplish the purpose of deterrent, constricting large companies and individuals from unnecessarily and improvidently clearing water. 

解析

政府為什么要管控：有限的水資源永遠(yuǎn)無(wú)法滿足人類(lèi)對(duì)于它們的無(wú)限需求,同時(shí)很多人也缺乏節(jié)約用水的意識(shí)，水資源短缺問(wèn)題越發(fā)嚴(yán)重,因此政府的嚴(yán)格管控有著比較重大的意義；

政府如何管控以及是否具有有效性：政府作為整個(gè)社會(huì)的管理協(xié)調(diào)者，也是最有能力最有可能解決社會(huì)問(wèn)題的主體，可以通過(guò)頒布更嚴(yán)的法律同時(shí)配備相關(guān)處罰措施達(dá)到管控使用水資源的目的；

potable adj.適于飲用的；可飲用的;
lavish adj.浪費(fèi)的；無(wú)節(jié)制的；
ballooning adj.急速增長(zhǎng)的；
occasion vt.引起；造成；
mushrooming adj.急速增長(zhǎng)的；
a raft of 大量的;許多;
prodigally adv.浪費(fèi)地；
ticklish adj.棘手的；難對(duì)付的；
paramount adj.至為重要的，首要的；
address vt.設(shè)法解決；處理；
enact v.制定，通過(guò)，頒布（法令）
price hike n. 提價(jià)；
deterrent n.威懾，遏制；威懾武器
improvidently adv.浪費(fèi)地；無(wú)遠(yuǎn)見(jiàn)地；奢侈地；

Conclusion

To recapitulate, water, in view of its insufficiency, is in desperate need for preservation with acts from the government and the public should also be warned not to be extravagant with such precious resources and economize on fresh water resource with such petty matters as taking a quick shower and fixing dripping taps, shouldering the responsibility by actively engaging in sharing the burden.

解析

recapitulate vi.概括；重述要點(diǎn)；
extravagant adj.奢侈的，揮霍的；
economize vi.節(jié)約，有效利用；
petty adj.小的；輕微的；

重申觀點(diǎn)：水資源有限，政府需要進(jìn)行管控，個(gè)人同時(shí)也應(yīng)該通過(guò)自己的行為積極參與；