1月28日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)旅游的利弊

2023年1月28日雅思大作文題目

Organised tours to remote places and communities are becoming more and more popular. Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the environment?

范文及解析

Introduction

With tourism having been developed into one of the most prosperous industries worldwide, tourists are now showing more preference for places of natural beauty. Personally, such preference, running counter to the widespread ideology, is in fact advantageous for both locals and the environment.

解析

年后的第一場考試不算難，旅游相關(guān)話題。注意利弊分析必須從「當(dāng)?shù)厝恕购汀腑h(huán)境」兩個(gè)方面闡述。

Ø prosperous adj. 繁榮的

Ø run counter to 背道而馳

Ø ideology n. 思想，意識

Body 1

For one thing, the popularity of these remote places may to some extent disturb local residents. This is mainly because some locals may either feel uncomfortable with outsiders intruding into every nook and cranny of their daily life, when communities are teeming with travellers everywhere, even at their front gates, or grumble when crowding with tourists into local shops for daily necessities. However, these problems can be avoided as long as local governments take locals’ needs into consideration and well design the tour routes. As a matter of fact, advocators will see this trend as a sound way to bring more immediate benefits for local inhabitants, since local industries, be they catering services, accommodation, or souvenirs, will thrive, producing more job vacancies.

解析

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Ø disturb vt. 打擾

Ø outsider n. 外人，外來人

Ø intrude vt. 侵入

Ø every nook and cranny 角角落落

Ø grumble v. 發(fā)牢騷

Ø thrive vi. 繁榮，興旺

Ø vacancy n. 空職；（職位的）空缺

Body 2

For another, it is justifiable for some to worry about the natural environment in those places. To illustrate, some tourists lack respect for the natural environment and irresponsibly dump the refuse they produce along the way instead of throwing it into dustbins. As a result, these remote places of natural beauty are spoiled and become not as pristine as before. However, such conundrums can be resolved if governments enact and impose strict environmental laws to punish those travellers who litter everywhere. Deterred by the punishment, tourists will regulate their behaviour and act properly. Meanwhile, the tranquil scenery in the wild can not only help travellers to relieve the pressure and recharge their batteries but also raise their awareness of preserving the natural beauty.

解析

環(huán)境層面：[讓步] 不負(fù)責(zé)的游客亂扔垃圾// [反駁] 政府制定規(guī)則，可以避免此類問題; [立論] 優(yōu)美的自然環(huán)境反而可以喚醒游客保護(hù)環(huán)境的意識

Ø dump vt. 傾倒，丟棄

Ø refuse n. 垃圾

Ø spoil vt. 毀掉

Ø pristine adj. 原始的

Ø conundrum n. 問題

Ø enact vt. 頒布

Ø impose vt. 強(qiáng)制執(zhí)行

Ø litter vi. 亂扔垃圾

Ø deter vt. 威懾

Ø tranquil adj. 靜謐的，安寧的

Ø recharge one’s batteries 養(yǎng)精蓄銳

Conclusion

To recapitulate, the downsides of visits to remote areas pale into insignificance when set against the upsides.

解析

重申觀點(diǎn)

Ø recapitulate v. 總結(jié)

Ø pale into insignificance 使顯得不重要