1月14日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 再次犯罪的原因及解決方法

2023年1月14日雅思大作文題目

Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from the prison. What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved? (2022/1/14)

范文及解析

Introduction

A mushrooming number of criminals, after being released from the jail, will revert to crime , exerting ceaseless baneful influence on the social harmony and stability. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my perspective, are two predominant factors and viable solutions are in urgent need to avert the bleak future.

解析

2023開年的第二場(chǎng)考試，雖然是很多考生害怕的犯罪類話題，但本題以說明文的形式考出，要求分析犯罪分子被釋放出之后繼續(xù)犯罪的原因及解決方法，是一個(gè)復(fù)古舊題，整體難度并不大；

mushrooming adj.迅速增長的；越來越多的；
ceaseless adj.不斷的；不停的；
baneful adj.不好的；有害的；
ticklish adj.難對(duì)付的；棘手的；

Body 1

The chief culprit for re-offending would be the difficulty for the criminals to settle down and reintegrate into the society. Indisputably, one of the root causes for anti-social behaviors is poverty, by which I mean living odds force some people to embark on a path of delinquency to support themselves by engaging in illegal activities such as stealing, larceny and the like. After being freed from the prison, with a criminal record, never would it be easy for the law-breakers who lack livelihood skills to secure a job and become economically independent. Another contributing factor for such a worrying trend has much to do with the psychology condition of the criminals. Suffering from improper treatment, be it physical punishment or verbal aggression, many offenders, when set free from the prison, are inundated with resentment instead of visions of life, for which they are apt to fall back into perpetrating crimes.

解析

接受過監(jiān)禁處罰的犯罪分子出來之后又繼續(xù)去犯罪主要的原因有：

(1)物質(zhì)層面：犯過罪的人出來之后在穩(wěn)定生活重新融入社會(huì)上存在明顯困難；

(2)精神層面：犯罪分子出獄后會(huì)因?yàn)樵诒O(jiān)獄中遭受的一些言語攻擊等不合理對(duì)待而產(chǎn)生報(bào)復(fù)心理；

culprit n.不好的事情的原因；罪魁禍?zhǔn)祝?br>reintegrate into v.重新融入；
living odds n.生活窘境；
embark on a path of delinquency v.走上犯罪的道路；
larceny n.盜竊；
verbal aggression n.語言攻擊；
are inundated with v.充斥著；
resentment n. 憤恨；怨恨；
are apt to v.傾向于；易于；
perpetrate v.犯罪；作惡；

Body 2

Prickly as the issue is, steps can be taken to address. Primarily,the government should play a leading role by polishing the effectiveness of imprisonment with the aim to help criminals achieving rehabilitation.To specify, job-related training targeted at those released offenders are staunchly suggested ,which enables them to be furnished with some employment abilities ,be it a plumber ,a hairdresser or a driver. In this case, they can be, in large part, encouraged to live a normal life rather than violate the law for survival. Efforts from family members, friends and the society are also indispensable to cure the mental disorders. To elaborate, showing enough respect and helping those ex-prisoners to find a job are great tender solicitude. The general public and the whole society should be made to believe a reformed man deserves a new leaf.

解析

解決方法：

(1)政府層面：進(jìn)一步改進(jìn)監(jiān)禁的教育方式從而達(dá)到幫助犯罪分子真正改過自新；比如可以更多地提供一些職業(yè)相關(guān)的技能培訓(xùn)以更好地幫助犯罪分子保證就業(yè)；

(2)家庭和社會(huì)：更多地尊重，接納，包容改過自新的罪犯；

prickly adj.麻煩的；
address v.解決；
rehabilitation n.改過自新；
staunchly adv.強(qiáng)烈地；
be furnished with v.具有；配備有；
solicitude n.安慰；關(guān)懷
reformed adj.改過自新的；

Conclusion

In conclusion, the problem for ex-prisoners to resort to offence, notwithstanding its gravity, can be brought under control with both the government and the public shouldering joint responsibility.

解析

總結(jié)前文

notwithstanding prep. 雖然；盡管；
gravity n.嚴(yán)重性;