12月24日雅思大作文示范寫(xiě)作 | 什么是理想國(guó)

2022年12月24日雅思大作文題目

What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?

范文及解析

Introduction

In the course of human civilisation, we have entertained different ideas of what a utopian society should be like and what the most vital component is. Personally, leadership by wise and righteous people plays the leading role, and to this end, leadership qualities should be fostered in the local settings.

解析

平安夜考試的話題著實(shí)抽象。審題時(shí)同時(shí)需注意：第一問(wèn)里問(wèn)most important element，出現(xiàn)最高級(jí)，即在論述過(guò)程中，起碼三者比較才能出個(gè)“最”。而第二問(wèn)，與第一問(wèn)是“目的與手段”的邏輯關(guān)系，第二問(wèn)要回應(yīng)第一問(wèn)的答案，才是好的任務(wù)回應(yīng)。

Ø course n. 進(jìn)展，進(jìn)程

Ø entertain vt. 持有，懷有

Ø utopian adj. 烏托邦的

Ø leadership qualities 領(lǐng)導(dǎo)素質(zhì)

Body 1

Two characteristics may be considered as the predominant ingredients of a utopia – a fair legal system and freedom of speech. For the former, if a criminal could be tried and convicted in a just process and, according to the law, given corresponding punishments, such as community service or imprisonment, then citizens will trust the judicial system since all the culprits will pay the price for their offence. Such trust in the judicial system in the long term will contribute to social soundness. As for freedom of speech, it enables the press or a citizen to show the wrongdoings of one or some specific authorities. This gives a chance for careful inquiries to ensure the transparency of the authority. Thus, corruption can be hampered. However, both of two elements largely depend on leaderships who uphold the spirit of serving the people. In other words, only with selfless leaders in an array of fields can individuals’ voices be heard, and the society be regulated in a fair way. Leaders can accept the criticism and ponder over citizens’ comments on the decisions and policies they have made, seeking for the agreements of the general public and balancing the interests of all parties.

解析

要素1：完善的司法體系 à 公平地判處罪犯 à 增加人民對(duì)于司法系統(tǒng)的信任，有利于社會(huì)穩(wěn)定；要素2：言論自由 à 媒體和公眾能夠指出權(quán)威機(jī)構(gòu)的錯(cuò)處 à 增加了透明度 à 防止腐?。?/ 兩者的實(shí)現(xiàn)，都離不開(kāi)服務(wù)于民的無(wú)私的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)班子

Ø ingredient n. (成功的)因素，要素

Ø try vt. 審理；審判

Ø convict vt. 定罪，宣判…有罪

Ø just adj. 公正的，正義的

Ø imprisonment n. 監(jiān)獄關(guān)押

Ø culprit n. 罪犯

Ø pay the price for… 為…付出代價(jià)

Ø offence n. 罪行

Ø wrongdoing n. 壞事；不法行徑

Ø inquiry n. 調(diào)查

Ø transparency n. 透明度

Ø corruption n. 腐??；貪污

Ø hamper vt. 阻止，妨礙

Ø leadership n. 領(lǐng)導(dǎo)班子，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)層

Ø ponder (over) v. 仔細(xì)考慮

Ø interest n. 利益

Body 2

To achieve this, judicious and selfless leaders should view the demands of its people at the local level. To illustrate, leaders should be selected from the talents in each field and elected by the public. Those nominees have witnessed or experienced in person what obstacles the public are confronted with and thus have a clear idea of what kinds of policies and strategies should be made to best accord with the communal benefits. For instance, a leader of the agricultural department should clearly know the local climate, the growth rhythm of crops, and pest control, and thus can lead the locals to harvest high crop yields. Only in this way can leaders win the approval of the public, which will further help them develop trustworthy relationships with other groups.

解析

領(lǐng)導(dǎo)層從基礎(chǔ)群眾角度看問(wèn)題：各個(gè)領(lǐng)域的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)人由該領(lǐng)域的杰出人物所擔(dān)任，親歷過(guò)相關(guān)群體的經(jīng)歷，了解他們的所思所感，才能做出更契合大眾福祉的政策。

Ø judicious adj. 明斷的

Ø nominee n. 提名者，候選人

Ø obstacle n. 困難

Ø communal adj. 公共的

Ø yield n. 產(chǎn)量

Conclusion

In a nutshell, wise and judgmatical leadership is the most essential element of an ideal society, and to achieve this, leaders with abundant local experience should be selected.

解析

重申觀點(diǎn)

Ø judgmatical adj. 明斷的; 周到的