5月7日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 出國還是留國內(nèi)

2022年5月7日雅思大作文題目

Some people think leaving their home country provides more opportunities for working or studying, while others think staying in their own country is a better choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

高分范文及解析

Introduction

To leave or to stay in our own country, that is a question. From my perspective, the key to this debate to a large extent lies in the domain we work in and the abilities we have fostered.

解析

全球化大話題下的老題。寫觀點時注意考慮問題的全面性，“出國開銷大、更發(fā)達”并不是特別合理的觀點，以中國為例，去歐洲或非洲或東南亞都是“l(fā)eave our home country”。相關(guān)話題：Nowadays, lots of students choose to pursue higher education abroad. Why do they choose to attend universities overseas?

? domain n. 領(lǐng)域

? foster vt. 培養(yǎng)（常跟抽象名詞）

Body 1

Leaving the home country does have its edges. For one thing, when living in a country that is advanced in the academic or technological domain a person wishes to pursue, he or she has the chance to receive the education or training of much higher quality than what his or her motherland provides. In this case, they are more likely to polish their knowledge, optimise their techniques, and update the information related to the field, thus gaining an edge over other counterparts in the rat race. For another, some people, especially those who have mastered certain skills, can leave for the country where elites in relevant fields are in dire need. In other words, the more vacancies the foreign country offers, the more opportunities they have. By stark contrast, staying in the mother country may either render them lagging behind in knowledge updating or incur heavier pressure brought by the intense competition.

解析

出國的好處：1. 去往在自己專業(yè)領(lǐng)域下比自己國家擁有更前沿技術(shù)的國家 → 更新知識，使自己更有競爭力 → 更多工作學習機會；去往缺少自己領(lǐng)域相關(guān)人才的國家 → 更多職位空缺//[對比論證] 留在本國：要么知識更新慢，要么競爭壓力大

? edge n. 好處，優(yōu)勢

? motherland n. 祖國

? polish vt. 潤色

? optimise vt. 優(yōu)化

? the rat race n. 〔大城市里的〕永無休止的激烈競爭，你死我活的競爭

? elite n. 精英

? vacancy n. 〔職位〕空位，空缺

? lag behind vi. 落后

Body 2

There are also a couple of benefits if one chooses to stay in the home country. The most conspicuous one is that he or she is more able to adapt into the changeable working environment. Unlike people studying or working abroad, who may be confronted with language barriers and unfamiliar cultural backgrounds, those staying in the mother country are more than equal to the task of coping with their work based on their deep knowledge of relevant policies or sound connections in the industry. Not surprisingly, the latter can seize more opportunities, while the former may suffer from reverse culture shock.

解析

留在本國的好處：更熟悉的環(huán)境，對政策、背景更熟知 → 更快適應工作學習環(huán)境// [對比論證] 語言障礙，陌生環(huán)境 → “逆向文化休克” → 不適應國外學習和工作

? conspicuous adj. 明顯的

? confront vt.〔問題、困難等〕使遇到，使面對

? be more than equal to a task 游刃有余

? connections n. 人際關(guān)系

? reverse culture shock n. 逆向文化休克

Conclusion

In a nutshell, if people tend to leave their home country for more studying or working opportunities, it is advised for them to think in advance about their individual issues and long-term goals, plan carefully, and get prepared for possible obstacles.

解析

重申觀點