大作文“時間對比”怎么寫？

今天給大家介紹的是雅思寫作中的“時間對比”類題目，這類題目會讓我們比較一個事物從過去發(fā)展到現在，它經歷了一個怎樣的變化。

首先讓我們結合一道真題，來看一看時間對比題，它有哪三個要素。

People live in twenty-first century have a better quality of life than people who live in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? （題目來源：2022年3月12日大陸雅思大作文）

通過真題我們可以分析出此類題目的三個要素。

● 要素一: 時間狀語，它包含過去時間（in previous centuries）和現在時間（in twenty-first century）。

● 要素二：比較對象，此題比較對象是（quality of life）。

● 要素三: 比較級，通常為形容詞+er形式，或者為more+形容詞，此題比較級為better。

在此類時間對比題中，建議大家優(yōu)先選擇now比past更佳，推薦使用萬 能理由：

A.社會客觀原因：社會經濟發(fā)展、科技創(chuàng)新、教育改革、環(huán)境變化、政府政策優(yōu)化等。

B.人為主觀因素(需要根據題目來定)。

此題是一道觀點類的大作文，討論的是21世紀人們的生活質量是否變得更好。

同學們要注意題目中的比較關系，即“現在生活質量比以前更好/更差”。

根據時間對比題的萬 能切入點，我們可以從很多方面展開，如：交通、網絡和通信、娛樂、醫(yī)療健康、居住環(huán)境、飲食等等，下面老師和大家來看看具體觀點：

多種多樣的交通工具極大地增加了人口的流動性。與過去的馬車、人力車相比，快速交通，如汽車、飛機，給人們帶來了速度與舒適感的極 致體驗。快速交通幫助人們打破了地理界限，人們可以在地球上幾乎任何地形上旅行，無論是湍急的河流，崎嶇的山脈，甚至是茂密的叢林。

A wide variety of transportation means have dramatically increased people’s mobility in the world. Compared with wagons and rickshaws, fast transportation, such as automobiles and planes, can provide us with an unparalleled combination of speed and comfort, greatly reducing the time and effort required to reach the destination. Thanks to fast transportation, the geographical barriers have been torn down, people are able to travel on almost any terrain on the earth, whether it is a raging river, rocky mountain or even dense jungle.

現如今，網絡和通信技術發(fā)展提高了人們獲取信息和交流的便利度。網絡和通信技術的發(fā)展改革了人們溝通和信息分享的方式，世界各地的人們可以利用網絡和通信技術進行資源共享或信息溝通。人們可以瀏覽新聞、快速地進行異地交流、網上消費、休閑娛樂等。過去人們只能靠耗時的書信聯系，親朋好友很久都見不到一面。

Nowadays, the advancement of technology gives rise to a vareity of sophisticated devices which enable people to gain knowledge and information conveniently. The advent of network technology has revolutionized the way people communicate and information-sharing. No matter where friends are, they can be reached at any time via telephone lines or cyber signals. Besides, modern people can browse news, purchase things, exchange ideas, watch movies or videos, and play electronic games online. By contrast, in the past, humans can only contact others mainly by sending them letters, seldom did they meet each other.

醫(yī)療技術的發(fā)展大大減輕了患者的痛苦、挽救了大量患者的生命，無數患者的生活質量和人均壽命得到了顯著的提高。過去很多地方醫(yī)療資源嚴重不足，條件差、設備少，很多患者得不到救治。

Medical techniques are becoming more sophisticated in the present age, which significantly alleviates the suffering of patients and saves lots of lives. Moreover, modern approaches have considerably extended sick persons’ lifespans and maximized their quality of life. By comparison, in the past time, there were insufficient medical resources, poor medical treatment and limited equipments in many areas, numerous patients died because of the lack of efficient treatment.

可以使用的萬 能切入點還有很多，同學們可以選取自己熟悉的觀點展開論證。

通過以上分析，希望能幫助大家在“時間對比”題的審題上有所啟發(fā)，從而提高該題型的審題效率。