支招小作文（83） | 流程圖5，水電站發(fā)電

* 柱圖，選自《劍橋雅思真題集14》

閱讀提示：

* 當然是要注意紅色加粗出來的詞匯和表達。去查、去記、去用。

* 還要注意句子之間是什么樣的聯(lián)系，是怎么建立這些聯(lián)系的。

Introduction

The diagram is an illustration of a how a power plant uses hydraulic power to produce electricity. Overall, the process is not complex.

* 第 一句介紹圖表的主題是肯定要的。

* 第二句總述圖表特征。在總述流程圖時，就說圖中的流程是復(fù)雜還是簡單（可能復(fù)雜可能簡單，要先看清楚，不要以為圖中東西密集就一定是復(fù)雜）。

Body

During the daytime, the intake point at the bottom of the dam is opened so that the river water, which is held in the high-level reservoir, flows through the aqueduct and rushes to the reversible turbines. As a result, the turbines spin to drive the generator at the power station. With the generator operating, electric power is produced, which is transmitted via the power lines to the national grid. The water meanwhile goes to the low-level reservoir and is stored.

* 先一段寫“白天/日間”的情況。

* 流程圖的寫作內(nèi)容并不難，只要符合圖中的“步驟先后”順序?qū)懽骷纯?，幾乎不需要加工?/p>

* 句子之間的銜接（注意黃色高亮的部分），單個句子的語法（注意有下劃線的部分），尤其動詞和名詞（注意紅色加粗的部分）是特別需要關(guān)注的。

During the nighttime, water in the low-level reservoir is pumped back by the reversible turbines and goes back to the high-level reservoir through the daytime route. The intake point is then closed at night to stop the water in the reservoir and opens the next morning.

* 再一段寫“夜間”的情況。

* 夜間的情況簡單許多。

Conclusion

In brief, a hydroelectric power station works in a simple way that has only a few steps, and water goes in a circle in this facility.

* 結(jié)尾段落就是“濃縮”一下主體部分所說的情況。這就是“總結(jié)”。

* 小作文不要洋洋灑灑寫太多詞?？刂圃?80詞以內(nèi)（本篇175詞）是老章一貫的原則。