支招小作文（82） | 柱圖7，多柱一組

* 柱圖，選自《劍橋雅思真題集15》

閱讀提示：

* 當(dāng)然是要注意紅色加粗出來(lái)的詞匯和表達(dá)。去查、去記、去用。

* 更重要的是看明白老章寫作的內(nèi)容思路（對(duì)于圖表中信息的取舍）。

* 還要注意句子之間是什么樣的聯(lián)系，是怎么建立這些聯(lián)系的。

* 小作文不要洋洋灑灑寫太多詞。老章從來(lái)都是控制在180詞以內(nèi)。

Introduction

Shown in the chart is a five-city survey about Australians’ preference for certain types of coffee and tea during the past four weeks. Overall, there are apparent similarities and differences between those Australians. 

* 第 一句介紹圖表的主題是肯定要的。

* 第二句總述圖表特征。老章這里用的是一個(gè)套話。

Body

Fresh coffee, chosen by less than 45% of people in each city, was the least popular choice in the past four weeks. Its undesirability was particularly notable in Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart. Instead, people were more likely to buy instant coffee, as at least half of those cities’ coffee drinkers chose fresh coffee. 

* 注意CC文脈：

1）第二句和第 一句之間的遞進(jìn)（并不一定需要邏輯連接詞）。

2）第三句和第二句之間的聯(lián)系（通過instead建立）。

3）第三句內(nèi)部，后半部分由as引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句，講述了主句（前半部分）里內(nèi)容的細(xì)節(jié)，于是整個(gè)句子有了“總—分”的層次感。

* 注意措辭：避免直接陳述百分比，而是可以把百分比抽象化。比如可以用：the least popular choice、were more likely to。

As for the third choice – going to a café for coffee or tea, four of the five cities showed an inclination for it as it was the choice of more than 55% of people in those cities. Adelaide was the only exception, where café coffee was the second choice, which lagged behind instant coffee by a negligible margin.

* 這是主體部分的第二句。注意：通過分段，行文思路顯得更清晰。

* 注意措辭：兩個(gè)長(zhǎng)句整合信息。第 一個(gè)句子中，是通過as引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句實(shí)現(xiàn)的。第二個(gè)句子中，是通過兩次定語(yǔ)從句實(shí)現(xiàn)的。

Conclusion

The general pattern is clear: those Australians were more favorably disposed to coffee or tea served in a café. 

* 結(jié)尾段落的內(nèi)容要根據(jù)主體部分的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行總結(jié)，避免出現(xiàn)主體部分沒有說(shuō)到的情況。