支招小作文（77） | 1.7 地圖4：訪客視角，看CBD的發(fā)展

【類型】地圖（非數(shù)據(jù)型圖表）

【細分】改建（最近幾年的地圖題的唯 一考核類型）

【寫作視角】地題圖題的主體部分可以選用以下三種視角中的一種：

1）上帝視角（俯視，寫平面圖）；

2）訪客視角（設(shè)置一個訪客作為你的avatar進入建筑或場地內(nèi)部，寫線路圖；

3）混合視角（就是平面圖混合路線圖）。

老章的這一篇采用了“訪客視角“寫法。

# Introduction

Depicted in the given pair of maps is the development plan of the town center of Islip. Overall, the town center will become a flourishing district.

* 注意：

1）flourishing這個詞，意思是“繁華的”、“繁榮的”。

2）district這個詞，意思是“區(qū)域”，后文中有替換詞—area和zone。

# Body（訪客視角）

A visitor entering the area from the west will immediately see a dual carriageway loop that contains most facilities in it as the first development. Going into the circle, the visitor will no longer find the main road but a pavement instead and will on the right-hand side find those shops remain where they are. 接下來，遇上格局混亂的地方，用模糊寫法（也就是不需要寫那么細致清楚，寫出大概即可） South of those shops, the current housing area will have new houses as additions, and the park will be reduced but its location will not be changed. Also, as the ring road will be built, the school and far residential area will be outside the loop.

* 老章提醒：建筑物等設(shè)施的說法值得注意，都是簡單易懂的小詞，但是對寫地圖題是重要的。

因為是訪客視角，所以方位上可以寫成“左手邊，右手邊”。On the left-hand side of the pedestrian walk, shops will be replaced with a number of facilities — a new car park and a new bus station, as well as a shopping center in between.依然是“模糊寫法”（不需要寫那么細致清楚，寫出大概即可。在建筑物沒有尤其突出的特點的時候，不用過分糾結(jié)建筑物的占地大小之類的方面。） At the end of this pavement, a path will be developed to connect the new housing to the ring road, making the new residential area accessible from the road.

* 老章提醒：小作文的內(nèi)容，不需要讓考官看著文字能夠出圖，而是文字描述符合圖的情況。所以，繁瑣復雜的部分應該學會和采用“模糊寫法”。

# Conclusion

n light of all the changes, the town center will look tremendously different in the future. 

* 老章提醒：地圖題的結(jié)尾總述就寫“區(qū)別大小”。