支招小作文（76） | 地圖3：“上帝”視角看計劃性改變。

【類型】地圖（非數(shù)據(jù)型圖表）

【細分】改建（removal、replacements、additions）

【寫作視角】“上帝視角”。注意：題圖題的主體部分有三種視角（對應三種寫作思路）：1）上帝視角（即俯視，當成平面圖寫）；2）訪客視角（即進入建筑或場地內部，以訪客視線，按照線路圖寫）；3）混合視角（即前兩種視角混合著用）。老章不常用純粹的上帝視角寫，這一篇從而值得注意學習這種視角的寫法。

# Introduction

The two maps depict the planned changes of a university’s sports center based on its current conditions. With replacements and additions, this facility will have greater versatility.

開頭段，固定操作。說明圖的主題，以及描述變化后的突出特點。

# Body

The entrance hall and the reception area will be expanded with a sports shop and a café in the west and east corners, while the central area of the premises will not change much, except that the gym will be extended eastward. The 25-meter swimming pool, the changing room and the seating zone will remain the way they are.

主體部分第 一段：按照圖中箭頭的指向，先描述一進門的區(qū)域的變化，從變化zui大的部分開始，進而寫到變化小或者沒有變化的部分。

Immense changes will be made on the outdoor courts, which are now independent of the central area. The west court will be removed, and as its replacement, a leisure pool and a changing room on its south will be built. The east court will also be replaced, and there will be a number of facilities where it is: the first is a sizeable sports hall that will share the wall with the seating area of the 25-meter pool; the second is a pair of dance studios that will be located directly opposite the sports hall; in addition, a changing room – adjacent to the café –will be built in the southeast corner.

主體部分第二段：視線轉向至東西方向的區(qū)域。與上一段的思路相同，先寫變化大的地方后寫變化小的地方。注意：需要通過一些連接詞向考官展示寫作的邏輯順序。

# Conclusion

With the planned changes, the sports center will be more multi-functional.