支招小作文（73） | 柱圖4：獨(dú)立兩年

數(shù)據(jù)圖：【柱圖】

考核點(diǎn)：如何描述【比較】

注意：

兩個(gè)年份是獨(dú)立的兩個(gè)年份，不要當(dāng)成連續(xù)時(shí)間。所以數(shù)據(jù)之間的關(guān)系不是線性的。

# Introduction

Shown in the bar chart is the percentage of British people making financial donations in two years – 1990 and 2010. And the people are divided into sub-groups by their age / are grouped by their age. Apparently, the general patten is that older people, with obvious greater percentages, were more likely to make donations than younger people.

* 老章提醒：注意下劃線部分的語法現(xiàn)象：倒裝。

* 老章提醒：注意綠色加粗字體部分的詞匯用法。

# Body

In the year of 1990, roughly 42% of the British aged between 36 and 50 gave money to charity, and this percentage was higher than that in the other groups. In stark contrast, donors in the youngest group accounted for less than one-fifth. In the other three groups, the percentage varied slightly between 31% and 35%.

* 老章提醒：注意綠色加粗字體部分的詞匯用法。

In the year of 2010, the highest percentage, which was almost 40%, was in the group of 51-65, and this number is in marked contrast tothe small number of 7%, which was again in the youngest group. The 40% also contrasted sharply with the percentage in the second youngest group, in which only a quarter of people donated money to charity. The other two groups both had 35% of people who made donations.

* 老章提醒：注意下劃線部分的語法現(xiàn)象：非限定性定語從句來補(bǔ)充說明信息。

* 老章提醒：注意綠色加粗字體部分的詞匯用法。

# Conclusion

At this point, it may be noticed that the year of 2010 witnessed an overall decline in the likelihood of making financial donations compared with 1990.

* 老章提醒：“at this point”的直譯意思為“在這個(gè)點(diǎn)上”，意義是“上面說了那么多，那么到這里，（怎么怎么樣了）”

* 老章提醒：總結(jié)部分的內(nèi)容有難度。能學(xué)會(huì)就多拿分，不能學(xué)會(huì)就罷了也無妨。