支招小作文（72） | 流程圖4：業(yè)務(wù)辦理

* 非數(shù)據(jù)圖：【流程圖】

* 類型三：【業(yè)務(wù)辦理】

* 之所以歸于“類型三”，是因為考察頻率低。但是，不得不防，而且其實也并不難。

# Introduction

Shown in the chart is the procedure of getting a driving license in a particular country. Overall, the process is not quite complex.

* 本段第 一句是倒裝現(xiàn)象。這個倒裝句型可以當(dāng)成套話記住和使用。Shown in the xxxx are/is xxxxxxx.

* 第二句話是對于圖的總述，遇上流程圖就是“此流程復(fù)雜/不復(fù)雜”。

# Body

As is indicated, all applications must be made only in the driving license center. An applicant should first fill in the forms with necessary information and then have his or her eyesight tested. Failing in the test will result in an unsuccessful application, and there will be no fees charged.

Those who pass the test will go to the next stage – the second stage, which consists of chiefly two steps. The immediate step is to take the written test, and to successfully get the driving license, an applicant must pass the written exam within a maximum of 3 chances and then pass the road exam, which is the other crucial part of the whole stage. It is notable that successful applicants will be not charged any fees.

Unsuccessful applications, at the second stage, include that applicants fail in all three attempts in the written assessment and consequently have no chance to takes the road exam and that applicants pass the written exam but fail in the road exam. In either case, fees will be charged.

* 注意句子主語/句子開頭的頻繁變化（尤其是不以“人”為主語時）。

* 注意名詞性從句在老章的示范作文里的使用（分別為主語從句被形式主語“it”替代，以及并列的兩個賓語從句）。

* 注意句子之間的配合（包括內(nèi)容上的配合從而構(gòu)成良好的CC，以及形式上的配合主要是長中短句子的交錯）

# Conclusion

In brief, getting a driving license is not procedurally difficult, but there is no guaranteed success.

* 對于圖的總述，即使在開頭段落已經(jīng)有了，還是能有一個結(jié)尾段落去再次總述更好。

* 老章給出的這個結(jié)尾段落的總結(jié)的后半句有些思考上的難度。如果無法理解或者學(xué)會，大不了后半句就不要了（畢竟你的目標分不會過分高）。