支招小作文（64） | 地圖2：比較關(guān)系的混合視角

* 非數(shù)據(jù)圖：【地圖】

* 主要描述【比較】，也可以理解為【變化】。

* 兩個年份都是過去，時態(tài)要小心。

# Introduction

Shown in the 2 maps is the change of the road access to City Hospital that happened between 2007 and 2010. 第 一句用定語從句修飾change的時間。 Clearly, the road access will be significantly different. 第二句話概括全貌。比較形的地圖題的全貌就寫“區(qū)別大小”。

# Body

這個圖很適合用“訪客視角”（路線圖）寫。但是老章還是用了“混合視角”，即前兩句“上帝視角”（平面圖）之后，第三句開始用“訪客視角”。

The most conspicuous difference results from/lies in the change of Hospital Road that two roundabouts were developed at both the south and north ends of the road. As a result of this change, the road no longer led to the hospital directly. 第 一句中同位語從句描述change的具體情況。In addition, in 2010, with the bus stops that were previously on Hospital Road removed, people taking a bus – staff or patients – would no longer stop on that road, and instead, they would stop at the bus station, which are accessible from either of the two roundabouts, and went to the hospital building via the north roundabout. 這一句注意獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)做狀語（即主語后直接跟動詞分詞）

接下來這一段，老章用了純粹的“訪客視角”。同時提醒大家注意，要分段，讀者才能看更清楚。

In 2010, staff who drive to work would still use the car park on the east side of Hospital Road, but the parking was exclusively for their use. The visiting public, since they would no longer be able to share the parking with the hospital’s staff, would park their vehicles on the east side of hospital building, and would use the additional access point on Ring Road to enter or exit from/leave the hospital. 

# Conclusion

In light of the changes, road access, in 2010, was quite different from it was in 2007. 結(jié)尾段落就這么一句重申一下區(qū)別的大小，可以么？當然可以。