支招小作文（62） | 地圖1：比較關(guān)系的混合視角

* 非數(shù)據(jù)圖：地圖

* 主要描述“比較”，也可以理解為“變化”

* “現(xiàn)在VS將來”，注意時態(tài)

# Introduction

Shown in the two maps are the present floor plan of Southwest Airport and the development plan of it. Overall, the airport after the development will be moderately different. 第 一句劃線部分是一個倒裝形式，當(dāng)成套話記住。提醒注意：動詞的單復(fù)數(shù)由后面的內(nèi)容決定。第二句話陳述圖的宏觀情況。通常說來，就是說一下區(qū)別的程度，或者變化的程度。

# Body

主體部分有三種寫法：上帝視角（平面圖）；訪客視角（視線圖/線路圖）；混合視角。

老章這里決定用“混合視角”寫作。用這個視角寫作時注意：用將來去比較于現(xiàn)在（而不要先寫現(xiàn)在再寫將來），這樣可能省字省勁：The most conspicuous difference is the 10 more gates on top of the existing 8 gates, and those additional ports are the extensions of the airport, making the airport larger. Accordingly, the present walkway, which transports the passengers to the gates, will be replaced with a sky train.

寫完外部區(qū)別后，到下一段去寫內(nèi)部。這樣通過份段來引導(dǎo)讀者的寫作思路是很討讀者喜歡的： The main part of the terminal building will have moderate changes only in its interior. First, both the entrance and the exit will have two doors. Second, departing visitors will see a bag drop area where the check-in zone currently is, and the check-in zone will be moved across the hall and against the east wall. Accordingly, the café will be relocated, and visitors will find it in the southwestern corner and in the immediate vicinity of the entrance. Another addition is the shops in the waiting lounge behind the customs. 注意老章已經(jīng)在這一段刻意覆蓋了常規(guī)各種可能的句子主語/句子開頭。通過豐富句子主語/開頭來豐富句子的形式是語法得分的重點。當(dāng)然，黃色高亮的部分是值得注意和記憶的名詞、動詞、方位詞。

In the hall of arrivals will also be a few more facilities. Arriving visitors passing the customs would look to their left-hand side for a café and an ATM on their way out.By the exit, car rental – another addition for visitors’ convenience – will be available in a small extension. 第 一句劃線部分是一個倒裝形式：說明方位的介賓短語置于句首時的主系倒裝。同樣黃色高亮的部分是值得注意和記憶的名詞、動詞、方位詞。

# Conclusion

In light of all the changes, Southwest Airport will have greater capacity and become more functional. 只要開頭段有了對于圖的總述，其實結(jié)尾段可以沒有。但是老章還是寫出來給參考和以后別的作文提示。