6月26日雅思大作文示范寫作 | 出國旅游還是上網(wǎng)？

2021年6月26雅思大作文題目

Some people think travelling abroad is necessary, while others think that is not necessary because TV and the internet can give the same information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

范文及解析

Introduction

To glimpse exotic cultures, some deem that overseas travels are no longer necessary since TV and internet have made everything possible. However, while people can enjoy certain convenience brought by such cutting-edge technologies, they may also risk losing some other essential things that in-person experience can offer.

【解析】老話題：有了網(wǎng)絡(luò)，啥都能被取代？觀點互斥，站邊可以降低寫作難度。

? glimpse v. 短暫感受

? risk doing…. 冒險做…

? in-person adj. 親身的

Body 1

For one thing, rarely can viewers and net surfers get fully immersed in their “travel” in front of a plain screen. Admittedly, by simply clicking a remote controller or a mouse, people can access some programmes and websites that feature renowned tourist attractions abroad, either natural scenery or artificial landmarks, engaging in a virtual tour without stepping a foot on another continent. However, online experience is overshadowed by the in-person one, owing to the atmosphere. It is the whistle of a bird or the red brick embedded in an ancient wall that can spark a person’s sense of connection with the exotic natural landscape or the history witnessed by the wall having stood on this land for centuries, thus opening the door to full immersion; this, nevertheless, is entirely impossible with a cold screen no matter how vivid the images it can present.

【解析】首句拋出主題句：細化people身份，利用viewers和net surfers點出“線上游覽”氛圍差了點。后面通過對比論證詳細論述：雖然電視節(jié)目或網(wǎng)頁也可欣賞自然風(fēng)光或是人造地標，但相比親身體會缺少了“感同身受”。

? access v. 獲取

? feature v. 以…為特征

? virtual v. 虛擬的

? whistle n. 囀鳴；唧啾

? spark v. 激發(fā)

? open the door to sth. 使…成為可能

Body 2

Furthermore, the home-based travelling mode is not satisfactory as it also deprives tourists of the opportunities of interactions with the locals. To illustrate, unlike the pictures and videos posted online, which simply deliver dull introductions and meanwhile shut the audience away outside the screen, overseas travels bestow upon visitors the face-to-face communication with the local citizens. In other words, a single word or a body gesture in locals’ daily life can easily facilitate tourists to capture the view of how those locals live, whereas such chances tend to wither away when people merely sweeping over the pictures presented on the websites.

【解析】對比論證第二個論點：與當?shù)厝说慕涣?/strong>

? deprive sb. of sth. 剝奪某人某物

? bestow sth. upon sb. 給予某人某物

? wither away 消逝

? sweep over 一掃而過

Conclusion

To recapitulate, though flexibility, be it spatially or temporally, can be offered by TV and the internet, complete reliance on them may render overseas travels neither impressive nor comprehensive.

【解析】重申觀點

? recapitulate v. 總結(jié)