2021年5月8雅思大作文題目
The best way to improve road transport safety is to let the drivers test each year.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
高分范文及解析
Introduction
Road safety is certainly an important issue, which is linked to not only the drivers but everyone else on the road. To improve safety, there is a list of ways, and my firm conviction is that testing drivers each year does not have much of a role to play in this.
解析
? 本題是一道絕 對題,涉及到關(guān)鍵詞“the best way”,拿到這類題站“disagree”一方會比較好寫
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To some extent, periodic re-testing works. >總分< Since most drivers seek a license at a young age, they may have let their guard down now on the road. Think about that: walking in front of a less-than-properly-skilled driver with vague memory about railroad crossing signals, the risk of an accident is certainly not low. In this case, taking the test and associated courses is a way of refreshing their memories with the latest driving laws and regulations. >轉(zhuǎn)折< However, it is far from the best way.
解析
? 考駕照肯定有用,但它并不是的方法。
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>支撐解釋1< Whether the government could provide enough testing capacity is the first question. To meet the need, it seems pressing to build a huge amount of examination sites and equip more staff, which is quite money-consuming and thus unfeasible. >支撐解釋2< Even if the government manages to do this, there is another worry: people would be weary of test preparation. They need to spend months a year reciting theoretical knowledge and practicing driving, and this is quite energy-consuming.
解析
? 本段開始質(zhì)疑“年年駕考”的可行性
1. 政府能夠提供足夠的考試名額嗎?
2. 人們是不是每年都要耗費大量的精力考試?
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Rather, the government can use other ways to improve roadway safety, such as harsh punishment and modern road design. >總分< Zero tolerance for transgressing drivers helps, which would see fewer of them drink-driving and more of them yielding to pedestrians. Road designs, including more roundabouts, adequate street lighting, and separated sidewalks for pedestrians, traffic lanes for drivers, are all effective approaches to reduce collisions and injuries.
解析
? 本段提出更合適的兩大措施
1. 對違規(guī)司機“零容忍”
2. 道路設(shè)計
Conclusion
In conclusion, asking drivers to take driving tests yearly would go some way to improve road safety, but it is too unfeasible for the government to conduct. Therefore, I tend to think that safety depends more on enacting stricter punishments on those who offend driving laws and on redesigning roads.
解析
? 總結(jié)上文
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