4月26日雅思大作文真題參考范文 I 國際快餐取代傳統(tǒng)飲食之我見

2021年4月24雅思大作文題目

In many countries, traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This will have negative effects on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

高分范文及解析

01

The frenzied expansion of international fast food has sparked a debate about whether this type of food should be developed or not. I personally believe that the negative effects of this trend are more obvious than the positive ones.

解析

? 傳統(tǒng)式開頭段，保險且不易出錯。通過替換表達“去模板化”。不一定要重復(fù)“This will have negative effects on both families and societies.”這層意思，因為已經(jīng)有“debate”表明了該現(xiàn)象所引發(fā)的討論。

? frenzied：瘋狂的

? spark：引起

02

Admittedly, sometimes, "Whatever is, is right." Socially, since people can eat foreign fast food in their own country, this means that the government allows people to conduct such business. The introduction of international fast food is not purely "alternative" to traditional diet. For example, a very famous fast food chain, considering Chinese people's preferences, launched a crayfish burger, widely popular. This is a good reflection of the fusion of domestic and foreign cuisines. At the same time, the development of fast food restaurants can create many jobs, which can drive economic development. With respect to the family, compared with the traditional diet, foreign fast food is more convenient, so that people can better enhance the efficiency of work and life.

解析

? 先讓步：存在即合理?？觳褪⑿胸S富了飲食文化，同時能夠促進經(jīng)濟發(fā)展，并且提升了人們的生活和工作效率。

? conduct: 開展（業(yè)務(wù)）

? alternative：可替代的

? crayfish：小龍蝦

? cuisine：烹飪（法）；菜肴

03

However, the disadvantages of this cannot be ignored. First of all, "localization" can only be available to very few western fast foods, and some fast food chains expand at a great scale, which cramps the survival of the traditional cuisines, leading to the loss of traditional cooking culture. This is why A Bite of China has gained unstinting praise among people, because many of us do not know the richness of the traditional Chinese food, as people usually pay more attention to the fast one. Second, from a family perspective, although fast food is convenient, it is mostly a combination of high sugar, salt, oil and calorie diet. It can bring about diseases such as obesity and hypertension if people eat it as a regular diet. Besides, this might put a burden on the family's medical expenses, and, from a macro perspective, on the health care system of the whole society.

解析

? 再反駁：國際快餐的盛行會限制傳統(tǒng)飲食的發(fā)展；常吃國際快餐不利于身體健康，進而會帶來醫(yī)療負擔(dān)。

? localization：本地化

? cramp：限制

? unstinting praise：贊不絕口，交手稱贊

? hypertension：高血壓

04

In short, if western fast food continues to challenge the status of traditional diet, the negative consequences will be very serious.

解析

? 總結(jié)：若任由國際快餐發(fā)展，其所帶來的消極后果是十分嚴(yán)峻的。

? status：地位