4月17日雅思大作文真題參考范文 | 為什么節(jié)假日不再戶外活動(dòng)了？

2021年4月17雅思大作文題目

Young people do not spend their holiday and weekend doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in natural environment. Why? How to encourage them to go out?

高分范文及解析

Introduction

Nowadays, youngsters are reluctant to allocate their spare time to exercising in open fields. Behind such reluctance are two predominant motivators, and hopefully some feasible approaches can be adopted.

解析

? 開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山去點(diǎn)題：年輕人不情愿休閑時(shí)間出門(mén)運(yùn)動(dòng)。同時(shí)給出自己觀點(diǎn)：這種不情愿的背后有兩點(diǎn)主要原因，也要可行的應(yīng)對(duì)措施。點(diǎn)到為止，不必在伊始詳細(xì)地拋出觀點(diǎn)。

? open fields 曠野

Reasons

To commence, this phenomenon can be ascribed to the unprecedented technology progresses. Unlike people in the past, who had few options to kill time and thus opted for outdoor activities as their mainstream of pastimes, the young at present, exposed to mountains of digital recreations, are more inclined to get immersed in or even addicted to video games or shows on television which offer them much immediate excitement. Not surprisingly, young people may find it dull to exercise outside. Besides, it is due to the rat race in either study or work that young people should work ceaselessly to accomplish their assignments, even burning the midnight oil. Naturally, exhausted, they desire a sound rest in leisure time instead of doing outdoor activities which further drain their physical strength.

解析

? 兩點(diǎn)原因：科技發(fā)展，年輕人更容易被追劇或玩游戲所吸引；平日工作或?qū)W業(yè)繁忙，閑暇時(shí)刻更想”癱著”。

? be ascribed to 歸因于

? unprecedented adj. 空前的

? pastime n. 消遣方式

? rat race 激烈的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)

? drain vt. 耗盡；排干

Solutions

Considering the repercussions incurred by this lifestyle, two schemes can be put on the agenda. The first imperative is that some public-service advertisements can be made to publicize not only the detriments brought by the addiction to digital devices but also the essence of taking a stroll in a natural environment. Fostering the awareness of leading a healthier life, young people may to large extent alter their current lifestyle. Additionally, educational institutions and businesses can on a regular basis arrange several outdoor activities such as excursions and mountain-climbing on weekends, during which students and young working professionals will be called on to smell the roses.

解析

? 解決辦法與原因可一一對(duì)應(yīng)：通過(guò)公益廣告宣傳使年輕人意識(shí)到問(wèn)題嚴(yán)重性，讓他們主動(dòng)減少電子產(chǎn)品的使用；學(xué)?；蚬径ㄆ诮M織戶外活動(dòng)。

? repercussion n. （常以復(fù)數(shù)形式出現(xiàn)）[尤指不好的]后果

? imperative adj. 迫切的

? excursion n. 遠(yuǎn)足

? working professional n. 上班族

? smell the roses 享受生活[尤指親近自然]

Conclusion

In a nutshell, since possible factors and workable remedies have been clarified, this thorny issue can be promisingly addressed through joint efforts from several parties.

解析

? 一句話總結(jié)：各方通力合作，問(wèn)題就能被解決。

? remedy n. 糾正方法

? thorny adj. 棘手的