4月3日雅思大作文真題參考范文 | 從網(wǎng)上看新聞是件好事嗎？

2021年4月3雅思大作文題目

More and more people no longer read the newspaper or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development? 

高分范文及解析

01

With news online dispersing like wildfire [獨立主格作狀語], the heyday of the newspaper industry and television news programs has gone. I tend to think this trend irresistible and positive [表態(tài)]. This [邏輯銜接]is partly because the Internet — a vast storehouse of digital information — is convenient for people to dig for previous news, whereas [對比] neither the printed paper material nor the TV programs are easy to preserve for information searching.  

解析

?在段表態(tài)（positive）

?并點出點積極之處（信息量大，方便讀者搜索以往新聞）

02

The mass quantity of news online[邏輯銜接] also benefits from its fast update speed. This [邏輯銜接] edge allows netizens to obtain any story from the blog of a witness the second it happens, which is remarkable and more importantly, life-saving when disasters happen. Newspapers and TV programs on the other hand [邏輯銜接] need time for editing, censoring, printing, and delivering, extending people’s access to news about the world to at least the next day.  

解析

? 第二段繼續(xù)點出積極之處（更新速度快，讀者能迅速獲取新聞）

03

Despite these [邏輯銜接], news online is still portable, with palm-sized technological gadgets only. Typically, for people in a hurry in the morning, convenience and mobility are always preferred, and this is why [邏輯銜接] they would like to browse breaking news from a handhold phone on the subway rather than spend minutes in front of the TV or carry a thick stack of paper materials out. 

解析

? 乘勝追擊，再點積極之處（便攜）

04

However[邏輯銜接], the demerits of accessing e-news cannot be denied. To get more traffic, some news editors no longer interview in person but fabricate, releasing inauthentic news online. Consuming such information [邏輯銜接], the public is hard not to be misled.

解析

?轉(zhuǎn)而寫一點消極之處（魚龍混雜，易被誤導）

05

In conclusion, I think the growth of online newspaper is positive. The main point is that government should superintend the released information and news writers should have a fact-finding attitude.

解析

? 最后一段不僅是總結(jié)上文，還給出了在此基礎(chǔ)上的一些合理建議。