3月27日雅思大作文真題參考范文 | 為什么走路變成了一種“”?

2021年3月27雅思大作文題目

Health experts claim that walking is the best exercise. However, people are walking less on a daily basis. What has made it happen and how to deal with this?

高分范文及解析

01

It seems that exercise, such as walking, has become a luxury for many people, and because of this, some of their health conditions are even affected. There are many reasons for this social phenomenon, but the good news is that some workable solutions can be offered.

解析

? 開頭段背景點題：步行對很多人來說已然成為一種。對原因和解決方案的表述不用具體，點到為止。

? luxury：（品）

02

Two main reasons should be emphasized. On the one hand, the pace of society is now much higher than that was in the past. A great number of people need to labor mightily in their work, trying to achieve excellent performance as a way to get a better standard of living. But a large part of this work is sedentary, so these people have little time to walk and exercise after the end of the day's exhausting tasks, because they also need more time to rest. On the other hand, even if someone has a certain amount of free time to arrange for themselves every day, the reality is that they prefer to watch TV and play electronic games to get instant pleasure and fill in their time, rather than choose to walk, which is a relatively "exhausting" activity but can strengthen their body.

解析

? 原因“一客一主”：客觀原因是因為當(dāng)下的工作方式，人們不得不久坐。主觀原因是因為人們會選擇看電視或玩游戲作為自己的休閑方式。

? labor mightily：奮力工作

? sedentary：久坐的

? instant pleasure：即時的快樂 

? fill in the time：打發(fā)時間

03

If people still maintain this "brand-new" lifestyle, it will lead to certain health influence, such as lumbar strain or obesity. Therefore, it is necessary to change this. Firstly, companies can implement flexible working hours so that people can have more autonomous time for walking and exercise to improve health and productivity. Secondly, people need to realize that increased walking time is not strenuous, but rather, it can increase physical vitality and energy. This awareness needs to be instilled in the public by social groups. Finally, people need to reduce the time they spend on "sedentary" entertaining activities, instead of playing sports video games to achieve the function of physical fitness and leisure.

解析

? 解決方案也是從主觀和客觀層面走：工作單位可以實行彈性工作制、通過社會組織的宣傳來提高人們的意識、人們要主動減少電子產(chǎn)品的使用時間，增加鍛煉的時間。

? lumbar strain：腰肌勞損

? autonomous：自主的

? strenuous: 費力的

? instill：灌輸

04

In conclusion, people need to be aware of the importance of health, and walking is one of the easiest and most effective forms of exercise that should be promoted.

解析

? 總結(jié)：人們?yōu)榱私】祽?yīng)該多走路，多運動。