3月6日雅思大作文真題參考范文 | 晚育的原因和影響

2021年3月6日雅思大作文題目

In some countries around the world men and women are having children later in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

高分范文及解析

01

In modern society, delayed parenthood is nothing unusual. This trend is in my view principally caused by people’s attitude towards career and the development of fertility treatment. In this essay, I will discuss these and analyze how this trend affects society and family life.  

解析

? 開頭部分即說清楚主要的寫作內(nèi)容

? 改寫題干，關鍵在于靈活改述而不僅是在單個單詞上做同義替換的手腳

? parenthood：為人父母 

? delayed延緩的

02

From the perspective of personal interest, there is a clear incentive for the pregnancies later in life: to increase the lifetime earning potential (為了工作多賺錢). Currently, increasingly men and women are career-oriented, thus delaying marriage to their 30s or even 40s to seek more education and secure a better job. This is especially true in some women, who believe that early marriage and childbirth will hinder them from advancing in work. High technology has also contributed to the flexibility in fertility (生育技術使人們無需擔心生育能力退化而早早產(chǎn)子). Unlike decades ago, when women worried about waning fertility and gave birth early, nowadays, couples can choose egg freezing, which enables them to wait until the right time to be parents. 

解析

? 回應個寫作任務，分析原因

? incentive：動機

? pregnancies later in life：晚育

? career-oriented：以工作為重的

? secure獲得

? hinder sb. from doing sth.：妨礙

? fertility 生育

? waning 衰退的

03

Exactly because of these reasons above, when a couple finally decides to have their own child, their family life gain certain perks. This is because older parents, in most cases, have already achieved their career goals. With a stable income, they tend to be more tolerant and focused in parenting, thereby a positive growth environment for children and a harmonious parent-child relationship (對家庭：成長環(huán)境好、家庭關系和睦). Although the individuals have seen virtues in the delay, this is not necessarily the case with the whole society. More precisely, the low birthrate would inevitably translate into the aging of population, and the graying society, in other words, means a lack of productive labors in the near future (對社會：老齡化嚴重、勞動力缺乏). 

解析

? 回應第二個寫作任務，分析影響

? perk：好處

? parenting：育兒

? translate into：轉(zhuǎn)化

? the graying society：老齡化社會

? productive labor：有價值的勞動力

04

In conclusion, there are diverse reasons and effects of having children later in life. To be qualified expectant parents, it is necessary to think clearly about all the existing pros and cons.

解析

? 總結(jié)上文

? Expectant parents：準父母